Re: The Last Sovereign [Updated 5/23]
I think it is delivered more powerfully/effectively the way it is done currently. I really liked it. I was actually mildly annoyed with the very start of the game's tone/dialogue, and when 'you' died, it was supremely pleasing and an excellent opener for the game's storyline. I really liked it.I think that like would have been better delivered in third person.
Start out talking about "him" then at the end of that you can say "but the story isn't about him" it can switch to second person ("you") for rest of the game.