thswherizat
Evard's Tentacles of Forced Intrusion
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Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]
I played the demo, which had some good art.
Will it always be this linear? Or will you get more options as to gow to progress as the game goes along?
Also, the game is absolutely full of grammar and spelling errors. You really need a proofreader or editor, because sometimes the text was so off it got confusing for me, kinda like one of those hooked RPGMaker games.
I played the demo, which had some good art.
Will it always be this linear? Or will you get more options as to gow to progress as the game goes along?
Also, the game is absolutely full of grammar and spelling errors. You really need a proofreader or editor, because sometimes the text was so off it got confusing for me, kinda like one of those hooked RPGMaker games.