RPG Maker Sarah's Life v0.6 - [*NEW UPDATE* 30-8]

[thswherizat]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

I played the demo, which had some good art.

Will it always be this linear? Or will you get more options as to gow to progress as the game goes along?

Also, the game is absolutely full of grammar and spelling errors. You really need a proofreader or editor, because sometimes the text was so off it got confusing for me, kinda like one of those hooked RPGMaker games.

 

[orcaki]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

i really liked the demo it was awesome
it was sort but the way you introduce the main and homeless guy was good
looking forward for next release and cant wait

 

[Impure]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

I played the demo, which had some good art.

Will it always be this linear? Or will you get more options as to gow to progress as the game goes along?

Also, the game is absolutely full of grammar and spelling errors. You really need a proofreader or editor, because sometimes the text was so off it got confusing for me, kinda like one of those hooked RPGMaker games.

Thanks for trying out the demo!

I'm sorry it got confusing for you, English is not my native language. I will try to make make less spelling errors in the future releases.

And no, the game won't be linear. Sarah will be able to do different things at different locations.

i really liked the demo it was awesome
it was sort but the way you introduce the main and homeless guy was good
looking forward for next release and cant wait

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Means alot to me.

 

[torkenstiem]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Thanks for trying out the demo!

I'm sorry it got confusing for you, English is not my native language. I will try to make make less spelling errors in the future releases.

i dont remember seein all that many spellin errors, atleast not enough to fuss about, but im justa country boy, so they mighta been natural for me

 

[Rivendark]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Liked the demo, nice blackmail, looks promising. When to expect an update?

 

[Angmir]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Thanks for creating games for Free ! Thats how it SHOULD be in Porn bussines.

We all started at pirating Japanese stuff - I wont belive anyone who would say he paid for all japanese flashgames vn etc he played.

Still anyone feeing generous to suport creators are surely welcome !

Apreciation not extortion !

 

[VersusX]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Downloading demo right now...
But couldn't resist to post already:
That is one hell of a hot secretary uniform she got there in the first pic . I'd love to be her *boss*

By the way you should make a search about how to compile a game without needing the RTP at all. That will make it better for everyone.
I can't remember exactly how it was in vx ace but you had to edit one line in the ini file qith the editor closed. If i'm not mistaken it's the first line, where it says RTP="xxx" i think you have to leave it as RTP= and save it.
Then in the export options you have to choose include rtp and make sure every resource you're using its already on your game's folder.
And i think that's all.
Still it's better of you look for the real tutorial where everything is explained.
If you can't find it, let me knoe and i'll get the link for you (right now i can't access it but i will when i get at home)

 

[Chartog]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Are you planning to release a demo with more content? If so, you have any idea of release date?

 

[Impure]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Thanks for all the nice comments! Sorry for my late reply (exams week...)

As for the expected update questions. This is what i'm planning on. I'm going to release a new version of the game each time a new scene is added for my Patrons (v0.1,v0.2 ect). After that a public version will follow some time later which then i will post in this thread.

 

[pirro]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Story sounds exactly like

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, which was an excellent game. There is a english translation for it. If you have not played it yet, I'd strongly suggest you do so. Should serve as a solid frame point to build your story and gameplay elements on.

I'm especially looking forward to how your corruption mechanics will work.
As for gameplay tempo, I'd wish you slow it waaaay down, and have a lot more build up and not such a... for a lack of a better word, silly reason for her blackmail.

 

[deem]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

If you take inspiration from To H, please no husband view point and do not force us to reach a point in one section to get the next and so forth

 

[torkenstiem]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

If you take inspiration from To H, please no husband view point and do not force us to reach a point in one section to get the next and so forth

atleast make it so the husband aint sucha lost cause. the way some games are, like To H, the wife might as well be single.

 

[deem]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

atleast make it so the husband aint sucha lost cause. the way some games are, like To H, the wife might as well be single.

I know right, maybe like a progression too many hours at work, bikering and fights something that drifts them apart no like, o i got my ass groped well it was nice so i go with it, no way to say no, the lack of common sense and comunication in games is impresive, also may i suggest use something like whatsup, or skype on a computer or chatroulete in the game for sexy time with the husband or strangers, but that is something very few games ever use and very little when they do
Like these games did, sort of,

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,

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, the second one did more and way better than the first in my opinion, at least.

 

[thswherizat]

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If you take inspiration from To H, please no husband view point and do not force us to reach a point in one section to get the next and so forth

God, playing the the Husband -'walk in every evening and go to bed'

Followed by the -'weekends are a waste of time for 90% of the game',

AND the -'every tuesday is a scripted event' really turned me off of that game.

@Impure: I can do a grammar check through the demos if you would like. Just throw me a PM.

 

[deem]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

God, playing the the Husband -'walk in every evening and go to bed'

Followed by the -'weekends are a waste of time for 90% of the game',

AND the -'every tuesday is a scripted event' really turned me off of that game.

@Impure: I can do a grammar check through the demos if you would like. Just throw me a PM.

Dont get me started on the landlord forced events, even though you could easily tell your husband or get the money by working and avoiding such nonesence alltogether

 

[YummyTiger]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Interesting start, and your 3d model is very nice. Just a few comments on the release plan though.

First, you plan on a new release for EVERY new scene? That's a lot of redownloading. Are you making sure that save games transfer? If not, I'm thinking you might have people lose interest quickly replaying over and over again.

Also, you have it priced so that I'd need to pledge $30 a month for the most recent update? That's... pretty high. I can buy Fallout 4 currently for $40, meaning I need to pay close to a full triple AAA game price every month for the most recent version. Seems a little excessive, but your call.

With how things are setup, I think the game looks like it might ultimately be a lot of fun, but it seems like one that I'm going to wait and see how it turns out. Good luck though!

 

[TDK]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Ok, tried demo and looking through these posts here are my thoughts.

To start with, I don't really like 3D h games. But that's just me so I'm just putting that out there so you'll understand why I don't comment on the art. After all, its your choice and I'm not gonna make you change that. Just trying to stay objective here

Secondly, and I'm presuming the premise of this demo is just a short showcase of the characters and whats going to happen, but I would say the blackmail should be a bit more out there other than "He's got my phone and it has pictures on it!". But again, I'm presuming this was just a, this is how my game will play out sort of deal. So, as long as the blackmailing has, not necessarily more depth, but more of a convincing ring to it, I think that'll be fine.

Thirdly, I'll have to agree with YummyTiger in that $30 to see every new update is a tall order. The reason being is that we don't know how often you'll update. That isn't to say you should update every week but $30 per month for an unspecified number of updates per month is asking a lot for potential patrons. Obviously its up to you since its your game, however your lifeline could quickly evaporate if your patrons feel you aren't delivering.

Last words: This has potential, I can see this game being something of a hit but so far, there isn't a lot to see. So for now, I'll leave you to it. Maybe after some more updates and development I might give another look. But from what I can see, I can't justify becoming a patron. I don't mean this personally and I hope you understand that. Good luck and I wish you success

 

[Cartoon Smut]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

I tried it.

I can mentor you and help you improve your game drastically.

Free of charge, no strings attached, if you're interested PM me.

RPGmaker mentor lol

 

[Impure]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

God, playing the the Husband -'walk in every evening and go to bed'

Followed by the -'weekends are a waste of time for 90% of the game',

AND the -'every tuesday is a scripted event' really turned me off of that game.

@Impure: I can do a grammar check through the demos if you would like. Just throw me a PM.

Thank you for the offer, i will think about it and let you know through pm!

Interesting start, and your 3d model is very nice. Just a few comments on the release plan though.

First, you plan on a new release for EVERY new scene? That's a lot of redownloading. Are you making sure that save games transfer? If not, I'm thinking you might have people lose interest quickly replaying over and over again.

Also, you have it priced so that I'd need to pledge $30 a month for the most recent update? That's... pretty high. I can buy Fallout 4 currently for $40, meaning I need to pay close to a full triple AAA game price every month for the most recent version. Seems a little excessive, but your call.

With how things are setup, I think the game looks like it might ultimately be a lot of fun, but it seems like one that I'm going to wait and see how it turns out. Good luck though!

To be honest i'm new to this. This is the first RPG maker game that i'm creating and my first time using Patreon. I might have to do some changes on the rewards section to make it more balanced and fair to my Patrons. And like i said, i'm very new to this. So i wasn't realy sure what kind of rewards i should do for my Patrons.

Ok, tried demo and looking through these posts here are my thoughts.

To start with, I don't really like 3D h games. But that's just me so I'm just putting that out there so you'll understand why I don't comment on the art. After all, its your choice and I'm not gonna make you change that. Just trying to stay objective here

Secondly, and I'm presuming the premise of this demo is just a short showcase of the characters and whats going to happen, but I would say the blackmail should be a bit more out there other than "He's got my phone and it has pictures on it!". But again, I'm presuming this was just a, this is how my game will play out sort of deal. So, as long as the blackmailing has, not necessarily more depth, but more of a convincing ring to it, I think that'll be fine.

Thirdly, I'll have to agree with YummyTiger in that $30 to see every new update is a tall order. The reason being is that we don't know how often you'll update. That isn't to say you should update every week but $30 per month for an unspecified number of updates per month is asking a lot for potential patrons. Obviously its up to you since its your game, however your lifeline could quickly evaporate if your patrons feel you aren't delivering.

Last words: This has potential, I can see this game being something of a hit but so far, there isn't a lot to see. So for now, I'll leave you to it. Maybe after some more updates and development I might give another look. But from what I can see, I can't justify becoming a patron. I don't mean this personally and I hope you understand that. Good luck and I wish you success

Yes i understand, and thanks. You should wait for the next release before you decide to whether this game is something for you or not.


And a big thanks to all of you for your kind words and the feedback!

 

[Impure]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Update 15-02: Sarah's Life v0.1 out now. Available to my Patrons.

The game will be available to the public after my Patrons have their fair share time with it. I will update this thread and make a post when i release the game to the public.