Re: Lily of the Valley - NTR H-English Game [ver0.1]
I really like the demo, although map/NPC interaction is still very much in its infancy, there is a lot of potential. I especially like the on-screen-stats and the scenic diversity they'll allow.
The animations actually quite surprised me - well done.
Are you going to implement model changes if the MC actually gets around to working out? That sounds like a hassle, not sure if worth the effort.
Is there going to be a schedule of work/volunteer work or will you follow a sandbox-y approach?
Re: Lily of the Valley - NTR H-English Game [ver0.1]
something odd happened on monday night....after work i went home, and did a bath ( chose to stay a little bit more) then i've gone downstair and an event started instatly, which was supposed to happen in the next morning...and after that, it was Monday morning again, instead of Tuensday and i couldn't do anything at work....so i had to load Before monday night and re-do it without taking the double bath and it worked fine with that
Re: Lily of the Valley - NTR H-English Game [ver0.1]
I played your game and l like it. Modeling of Lily is awesome and game has lots of cg. Even talk someone whit no h-scene Lily cg appear. Not a simple cg, full room detailed one.
First; I dont wanna lily's ass and breast be smaller so if I can choose she cant make exercise.
Second; Options is everythink in this game for me.(like elevator scene) I like to choose between options. Every choice sent you another path and another h-scene. I like discover new thing. What happend if I chose that? I play again for discover. Make her slut or faihtful wife... Lets us choose.
Jebus on a fucking motorbike... That game is awesome.
Really nice graphic and animations(!).
Good story. Just keep a low pace so it won't become to unrealistic.
And I really like to stats at the top of the screen. Kind reminds me of LoP games.
I really like the demo, although map/NPC interaction is still very much in its infancy, there is a lot of potential. I especially like the on-screen-stats and the scenic diversity they'll allow.
The animations actually quite surprised me - well done.
something odd happened on monday night....after work i went home, and did a bath ( chose to stay a little bit more) then i've gone downstair and an event started instatly, which was supposed to happen in the next morning...and after that, it was Monday morning again, instead of Tuensday and i couldn't do anything at work....so i had to load Before monday night and re-do it without taking the double bath and it worked fine with that
Hmm... Nope, the code is fine.
There is a possibility that RPG Maker failed to process something. And that's like 1000000000000000/1
Even then it's likely impossible coz that needs to happen more than once.
I mean, I don't say that I don't believe you.
Just saying that's not the problem caused by code.
Please send me a pm if you notice that again.
Thank you.
I played your game and l like it. Modeling of Lily is awesome and game has lots of cg. Even talk someone whit no h-scene Lily cg appear. Not a simple cg, full room detailed one.
Second; Options is everythink in this game for me.(like elevator scene) I like to choose between options. Every choice sent you another path and another h-scene. I like discover new thing. What happend if I chose that? I play again for discover. Make her slut or faihtful wife... Lets us choose.
As always sorry for my English and good luck.
Re: Lily of the Valley - NTR H-English Game [ver0.1]
the added images are a nice touch...my only problem is its hard to imagine a waitress or evena cashier workin in high heels. sandals might be ok or some kinda open toed shoe to keep it sexy, that wouldnt look right with nylons tho, but ima barefoot guy anyway .
the added images are a nice touch...my only problem is its hard to imagine a waitress or evena cashier workin in high heels. sandals might be ok or some kinda open toed shoe to keep it sexy, that wouldnt look right with nylons tho, but ima barefoot guy anyway .
Re: Lily of the Valley - NTR H-English Game [ver0.1]
So I know you admitted that the spelling needs work, but since this is the edited demo I looked a bit harder at the spelling and grammar. This is what I found in the first part, I could try to look at the rest if it's helpful.
When Lily enters the building to see mrs. Clarkson:
"take a stairs" should be "take the stairs"
"moment of siliance" should be "moment of silence"
"especially the days like this one" you can leave out "the"
"those problems, so yes I know" this is odd English, you can replace ", so yes I know" with the word "myself" and it flows much better.
"saw you around before" should be "see" or "seen", don't recall the exact sentence but 'saw' was wrong.
"It's more like my own free will to help out" the word 'it' isn't the start of the sentence so no capital letter is needed. In addition this is an odd thing to say. Lily is going there according to her own free will that's true, but that's not how people talk. She would probably say that's she volunteering, doing volunteer work/voluntary service or something like that.
At mrs. Clarkson:
"helping the old bat" she's referring to herself her so you should replace 'the' with 'this'
"a fresh bloded stud" should be "blooded"
"tick and hard" should be "thick"
"that much expensive" you need to leave out the word 'much'
Grose should be Gross (Grose is a car )
"that red one" since mrs. Clarkson is already referring to the jukebox/record player as "that bad boy" and she's not asking for a specific red wine I would change 'that' to 'a' or just say something like 'red please'.
fealing should be feeling
washing mashine should be washing machine
"he barely seeing light of day" should be "he's barely seeing the light of day"
Fread should be Fred
who elese should be who else
.hahaha is technically a new sentence so the first H should be a capital letter
"and throw him out" should be "and threw him out"
"that outta my head" the 'that' is referring to something that's not directly mentioned before, so it's better to replace it with 'those nightmares/dreams'
"ohh I just got something on my mind" this sentence doesn't really work, what you mean to say is that she just thought of something/something came to mind. Saying "got something on my mind" means your distracted/thinking of something else
sesions should be sessions
"that i sent you" the I should be a capital letter
English isn't my native language, so maybe I got something wrong or overlooked more mistakes. However I think most of these are accurate.
As for the rest of the demo, I love the new images in the bathroom, in front of the tv and the images when you dress in a new outfit! Especially the bathroom and tv pictures are amazing. The outfit pictures are good too, but some seem a little too tilted.
I also noticed it's possible to take a pee inside the house now, pictures include. This kinda has me scared that there will be a scat scene. Not a fan of that personally.
What I am a fan of however is Nicole and her tight sweatpants. Will she be featured more and will she be as promiscuous/slutty/naughty as she comes across? Would be cool to see if her and Lily have a friendly competition to see who can attract more customers at the diner.
Speaking of the rest of the game; will Nick find out about the things Lily will be doing? Or will he remain blissfully unaware as Lily tries to hide everything while making it up to him? Kinda hoping for the second option...
Last point: not sure if this is worth mentioning, but when Lily showers she leaves the door open even despite knowing it's not just her and Nick in the house. Leaving the shower door open not only means that anyone can just freely look inside, but also that the bathroom floor will be soaked with water. I know, this is porn and full on realism isn't expected. So this can just be ignored, but still thought I'd mention it.
Re: Lily of the Valley - NTR H-English Game [ver0.1]
I only have one question. Is the MC a whip or will he actually fight for his wife? I really love those NTR stories where after the MC find out whats going on he actually takes steps to get back hes girl. However that actually could make the whole thing much more complicated.
I also noticed it's possible to take a pee inside the house now, pictures include. This kinda has me scared that there will be a scat scene. Not a fan of that personally.
I only have one question. Is the MC a whip or will he actually fight for his wife? I really love those NTR stories where after the MC find out whats going on he actually takes steps to get back hes girl. However that actually could make the whole thing much more complicated.
Re: Lily of the Valley - NTR H-English Game [ver0.1]
No scat and more Nicole, sounds good! Perhaps some cameltoe action? Some whaletail +wedgie fun? Or no panties = visible ass crack when bending over? My mind is racing with silly naughty things over this .
Not quite sure how me and Wessex are sharing the same opinion though. I think he wants the husband to become aware and fight for his girl, while I want him to remain unaware and Lily to fight for their relationship. Preferably by letting him go further with sex while she 'accidentally' keeps doing naughty things with others .
Then again the game is great so far so perhaps you've found a way to keep us both happy? Either way everything looks awesome so far so I'm looking forward to the next release.
Re: Lily of the Valley - NTR H-English Game [ver0.1]
Just tried it, I'm not an amazing reviewer so in short, it looks good and it has lots of potential! Looking forward to see where you're taking the game.
Just tried it, I'm not an amazing reviewer so in short, it looks good and it has lots of potential! Looking forward to see where you're taking the game.
