Re: A very hesitant Attempt...
I prefered her with that nicely dark face which matches the position she choose that says (c'mere boys lets have some fun) than the last updated face which says more something like "oh damn, what have i done" expression while still tempting them by "showing them the goods".
Hey, thank you for the feedback! That "C'mere boys, let's have some fun" was what I actually meant! However I am still far from mastering facial expressions therefore I had to find a compromise. I redraw her face a couple of times until I found the way to draw the kind of face I liked. Not an easy task...
I see you like the older face more although I felt really uncomfortable with her lips and eyes and the face looked too long. Dunno, these are just my tastes obviously. So I think "next time" is all I can do.
I improved and hardened the shading and did several rearrangements here and there. Now I am painting the last details! I am adding some jewelry pieces so I can play, and obviously train, with materials and light effects. This piece taught me a lot and I feel I improved a little bit more.
Next time will be back to outlining style in the hope that switching from one style to another will force me to improve more and more.
Anyway, here my latest update! (with a bith higher quality) Feedbacks and any kind of critique is always welcome!
