Re: Adventures of Tara - English H-Game [Demo]
I thing you've misunderstood what I was saying, but I'll try to be clearer.
I feel like that's the interesting part though. She is obviously not like other protagonists where she shys away from doing stuff like that, while having no idea what is she doing but at the same time doing it because she would get herself rid of that "feeling" she's getting.
Tara definitely starts out "not like other protagonists", but then she almost immediately gets turned into the Naive Schoolgirl trope... The way she references 'naughty bits', the passive embarrasment, the meek submission are all pretty standard stuff for that trope and she slips right into them.
She doesn't really resist at all, which doesn't make sense for the Self-Entitled Bitch personality that she's given at the beginning.
Now keep in mind I'm
NOT saying this shouldn't happen... I'm just saying it shouldn't happen so damn fast.
First of all, she doesn't shy away from it, because she knows it will help her, and she doesn't seem like a slut exactly because she is doing this because it would help her. Furthermore, there's nothing to indicate she becomes a slut unlike in other games where the protagonist actively looks around to find a dick to suck or ride.
Are you saying you think she believes, from day one, that this is all going to help her in the long run and so she's just embracing it from the moment it starts?... How is that more interesting? Where's the drama in that?
Also, if she's already down to get dirty that quick, why does she keep thinking about revenge?
I think it's a much more interesting story arc if she first resists, then starts to understand, and finally sees an opportunity she can actually exploit for herself... So that when she finally truly 'submits' it may not be quite what the villains expected.
And secondly, if she "knows it" as you say, then there wouldn't be much of a corruption element in the game.
She knows she's rich, talented and beautiful. How does that negatively effect corruption? ... It seems to me that people who are wealthy and full of themselves are generally -more- corruptible, not less.
I -want- to see the corruption happen, and at the moment we don't get that... She's a Domme one minute, and then immediately becomes a Sub she moment she's exposed to this strange magic we call 'being horny'... That's not a process of corruption.
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So let me just expound upon what I think a process of corruption would look like:
Firstly everyone's favourite uppity bitch is incensed at the liberties all these young men are taking, blackmailing HER?!? Fondling HER?!? Making HER the victim of their animal lusts?!? ... And so she resists. She insults them, mocks them, even while she's doing everything they tell her to. Even when they try to punish her for it... And every time she does she just makes herself hornier and hornier from the curse, until she ends up lost in her own desire and lust. And every time the guys congratulate themselves and pat themselves on the proverbial back over what great slut-trainers they've turned out to be. Because that's the only way they can rationalise this limitless elvish fucktoy they've created.
And every night our anti-heroine returns to her room only to be toyed with again by the emboldened puppy-dog guy that used to follow her around everywhere, who knows about the curse and uses his stories about all those times in years past (remember they're all in the final year now, so they've known each other a good long while) when she would tread on him in her climb to the top of the class, treating him like shit while he remained loyal. And now he's increasingly getting a kick out of -making- her treat him badly, finding buttons he can push that make her lash out, and get hornier... And hornier, and hornier until she's literally whimpering in her frustration at not having his cock pounding into her.
And then somewhere in this blur of day, after night, after day of seemingly endless violation she starts to realise something... She has, a strange kind of power here. She keeps getting everything she craves, even if it's a curse making her crave it, and the young men feeding these cravings are HERS... What she gives to them and takes from them she can give and take from any man. Maybe even women too, why not?... But what they now crave? They can only get -that- from HER.
And so she starts to explore this new idea... The old Grand Master, who likes to look but is too wise to try and touch, could she make him crave her too? Crave her so much he'd risk propriety and his very position at the school just to plow her with that wrinkled old cock? Wouldn't that be something... And the Invigilator! Oh, the very demon who cursed her! She'd just bet that he'd be curious to see his own handiwork, to lay his giant hands on the tiny, fragile young form he tried to mold? To delve deep, deep down inside and really understand what makes her tick, to draw out her full and total potential? Oh yes, he most definitely would.
That would be my process of corruption...
