Re: Noxian Nights (Updated 3/20)
I'll second the whip bug. Whipper guy only ever uses pain potion. I've never even seen his scene without the potion (assuming he has one) because the potion never gets used up, and there's no option to choose whether he uses it or not.
Salesman just keeps going on about buying one of two whips, but never offers to sell them.
Frankly, some way to see how many potions you have left would be great. Not having an inventory screen sucks. (maybe tie it to the potion cabinate where you can use health-potions?)
As for other stuff... I'm torn. I loved the first version. It was small, but it had a better "tone" than this one.
This one is longer, and I laughed a little at some of the scenes, but the whole "failing slaver fumbles his way to victory" isn't as interesting to me.
Plus. Whoring Rivan out sorta goes against the plot, where it's mentioned several times that the slaver is keeping her to himself. (if you choose to play it that way.)
Doing the "heroic rescue" option and training her obidience over her lust makes it clear that you're going for the "personal slave" ending, but you still have to whore her out to make money.
Robberies seem a little too common too. I was seriously struggling to make enough money to hire guards to stop me getting robbed, because I was getting robbed.
Especially bad when you're only making 7 gold a day and you get burgled every three or four days.
I had to use CE to get out of that rut.