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Re: Meet and Fuck Games Community
Your a good writer.
Now,
All that color, and bold and stuff you put into your story needs to go because those things DO NOT show up on MnF site, and I don't want to have to remove it all for you later, I'm sure Haseo or whomever doesn't want to either.
Also 8 scenes is way too long for a game, especially a Kosmos game, you should cut it to 4-5 scenes max.
Other than that it's good, and No you don't always need example art
First off,OK, here is it in formalized written form. I did in a similar way to the standard used in their games, to make things as clear as possible.
So, what you guys think? I hope you enjoy my silly jokes, like SF1 win quote in the endingStrip Fighter 2: the New Cummer
The sequel to Strip Fighter, much better than the original and considered a true classic by fans!
Based on MNF Zelda games, with the hide and seek segments they usually put in their releases.
Main character: average thin young boy, with blonde hair, glasses and a Kung-fu gi. I will name him Bob, just to make things easier.
Part 1:
Game starts into a classic fight scene, in the top of a montain region, with a background in orange sunset showing only two dark sillouettes, trespassing themselves using each one a dash punch. A "You lose!" message appears in the screen. We will call this one the "You lose scene".
On the above scene, you can identify one of the shadows being Bob, and the other being Chun-li.
In the second scene the two are no more obscured and you can see Chun-li with a very curvaceous and huge body. Bob is fallen in the ground and Chun-Li is saying to him something in the lines:
- You are very weak and pathetic! If you ever become strong one day, look for me again.
She leaves and Bob stays complaining about being a disaster with tears in his eyes. Shortly after, Gen appears there and tells him that he saw everything that happened, and and will teach him a secret technique of Kung-fu able to mess up the senses and the mind of the opponent with a single move.
A screen with "hours later" is displayed and the games turns back to Bob and Gen, saying something like:
- Good, you learned the move! Now go and make good use of it, become stronger and find your place in the fighting world! You shows much promise!
- Thank you old master! I will!
Part 2:
Game skips to a city map, with 5 locations (school, park, pub, gym and the montain), but the montain is not selectable now, each one with their name and the respective girl face. Bob says something in the lines:
- Alright, time to kick some ass! Let's find some street fighters over the city and get stronger! For now I'm still physically weak, so my only chance is catch them off guard and put all of myself into master Gen's technique. I wonder if I'll find other sexy women like that chinese bitch. Damn, she was so tasty... maybe I could use my new move to mess her mind to make me some "favors"?
Then, player chooses the location/girl of the following, in any order:
School (Sakura, well defined body with large thighs and ass)
"Entering scene" is played, in which Bob walks over the scenery and talks something according. For example:
- The students said I could find a fighter girl inside class number XXX, looks like I'm close...
When he approaches the door, he is taken by surprise by the sight of Sakura tying the laces of her shoes inside the classroom. The mini-skirt is suspended showing all of the ass and thighs, with her red panties.
Bob says:
- OMG! DAT ASS! I must see that thing closer, but first I need to bring her down.
Hide and seek segment: Bob, hiding behind the wall near the door, spying Sakura on the same position, without getting caught.
If caught, "You lose scene" is played, with Sakura's shadow.
If you get to the end, Bob says "Now it's the time!" and jumps to the entrance. A box with Sakura's surprised face appears somewhere in the screen.
"You win scene" is played. It's the same of "You lose scene", but with the win message.
"Naughty scene" is played. In this scene the girls, with naughty face and hearts over their heads, talk flirtatious things, like:
- You have such precise moves! And I lost so much time going after Ryu... Now let me show you what the true fan love is!
Sex scene 1: Bob receives a thigh job behind Sakura, while he massages her hairy pussy, until he cums. Both are naked except by Bob's glasses and Sakura's headband.
Gym (R. Mika, curvaceous body with large breasts)
Entering scene is played.
Near the gym's changing room, Bob sees Mika inside with her face a bit nervous, trying to put her large breasts inside her small top with hearts. He says:
- Good thing that blonde cow is more concerned in show her melons than her back...
Hide and seek segment: Bob again behind the entrance spying.
Get to the end, with Mika's surprised face.
"You win" and Naughty scene are played.
Sex scene 2: Bob, sitting on a chair, receives a tittyfuck. Both naked except by glasses and Mika's mask.
Pub (Poison, curvaceous and well distributed body)
Entering scene is played.
Close to the place's bathroom, Bob faces Poison with a calm face trying to lift her hotpants back, with her hairy pussy exposed. Comment:
- There's something strange about that beauty, but I'm not sure what. However I would still bang her!
Hide and seek segment: Bob again behind the entrance spying.
Get to the end, with Poison's surprised face.
"You win" and Naughty scene are played.
Sex scene 3: Poison is anally fucked in reverse cowgirl position with both sitting on a toilet. Bob also massages her breasts. Both naked except by glasses and Poison's cap.
Easter Egg: in "Sex scene 3", if the player clicks over a dildo in the floor near the characters, Poison says "Ah, I see you're this type of guy...", them a dick with testicles replaces her vagina. The scene is still the same, but her dick grows harder while she's fucked and also ejaculates after Bob's turn.
Park (Elena, well distributed body, less curvaceous than Poison)
Entering scene is played.
In the trees, Bob sees Elena training in her upside down winning position of the game. Comment:
- What a incredible trained chocolate body! If she can uses her arm as a leg, maybe the inverse is also possible...
Hide and seek segment: Bob hidden behind a tree.
Get to the end, with Elena's surprised face.
"You win" and Naughty scene are played.
Sex scene 4: the two are sitting on the ground naked (just glasses and Elena's jewelry). One of her foots is giving a footjob to Bob and the other is beign licked by he.
Part 3:
After the last stage is completed, Bob says in the map:
- OK, now I feel like I can finally win that fight! I greatly improved my technique and also learned a lot of tricks from those chicks. Let's go!
Player clicks the Montain area and go to the entering scene inside the local landscape.
Chun-li appears and they starts to talk:
- You again? Wasn't last time humiliating enough?
- This time will be different. Now I will fight face to face with you, and win with a single blow. After this you will pay for my last defeat!
"You win" and Naughty scene are played. There's no possible way to lose.
Sex scene 5: the same of Sex scene 4, but Chun-li is still dressed and using her pantyhouse to give Bob a double footjob.
Sex scene 6: the same of Sex scene 1, but Chun-li is dressing just her pantyhouse, blue bra and panties, and her hair buns.
Sex scene 7: the same of Sex scene 2, but Chun-li is dressing just her blue panties and hair buns. Bob is sitting over a stone. This time she is also licking the head of his dick.
Sex scene 8: the same of Sex scene 3, with Chun-li dressed only with the hair buns. This time Bob is tweking her nipples and, after he cums, some milk also runs over her breasts.
The winning fanfare from SF2 plays in the backgrond and they talk a little:
- So, am I the strongest woman in the world or not, sweetie?
- Indeed, you gave me a lot more work than the others I faced. But don't forget there are many chicks like you all over the world. Time to travel!
Also, are the example images really necessary? I didn't put them because I think the descriptions already very objective, but I can edit if needed.
Your a good writer.
Now,
All that color, and bold and stuff you put into your story needs to go because those things DO NOT show up on MnF site, and I don't want to have to remove it all for you later, I'm sure Haseo or whomever doesn't want to either.
Also 8 scenes is way too long for a game, especially a Kosmos game, you should cut it to 4-5 scenes max.
Other than that it's good, and No you don't always need example art
