Hmmm, this seems like it's going to be good.
The sprite lacks 1-2 frames of animation, still good tho'.
Tracking, and it's on my list.
I agree that her boobs are too big. Please, for the love of god, just give us one game where the girls have normal sized boobs. I know you want to animate them bouncing around, and that it's hard to animate real boobs (that are more 'attached' to the chest), but I'd rather have suboptimal animations than yet another "basketballs in grocery bags"-titted character.
Honestly, there are more action H games with medium/small breasted characters, so large breasts are hardly overdone.
That aside, do you plan on doing in-between animations? (run start, transition between jumping and falling animation, etc)
IF anything her ass is too small.
But I, for one, do actually like her design. She might be a a bit well-endowed, but it isn't big enough to seem over done like a lot of the crazy-sized stuff coming out of anime.
nope. i'm gonna keep her the way she is, because i like big boobs
I know this goes without saying, but as long as you have threesome or gang-up in your bucket list of H-animations to do, I'm sold.
i'm working on getting her half-clothed variations animated and fully implemented,
For next time, I'd recommend putting off animating clothing variations until the end. Otherwise, you run the risk of creating a lot more work for yourself if you decide to make changes later.
and yet, the animation system i have revolves around having both sets of animations - and by editing the existing sprites to have her partially-unclothed set, i was able to solve a major animation glitch that wouldn't have been noticeable without it.
Apparently I phrased that poorly. I didn't intend for there to be any "attitude", and I apologize if it seemed that way. I also didn't intend to imply that your animations were shitty; they're extraordinarily good. I thought what I wrote was just a bland expression of preference; I like normal-sized boobs, and I think there are multitudes of large-breasted characters in this genre already, so I hope you make a character with normal-sized boobs. Note that I used "hope" there -- I didn't know you were far enough along such that you'd have to remake a bunch of animations to change her bagoogidies. Yeah, if you're several animations in, then it's totally impractical to change something like that. I understand.nope. i'm gonna keep her the way she is, because i like big boobs, and i don't feel like trying to replace all of her animations and design with smaller ones because one or two people don't like larger breasts. if they were basketballs in grocery bags they'd look a hell of a lot shittier than the effort i've gone through to animate them.
also, i'd appreciate a little bit less attitude next time if you're making a suggestion. just because they're not b cups doesn't mean they aren't "normal size", there are plenty of women who have natural boobs a LOT bigger than this girl.
@nicko - thanks for that. i seriously don't understand why people are treating her breasts like they're the size of an atomic bomb, they're not even close to how ridiculous some games/anime/hentai make their girls look
Apparently I phrased that poorly. I didn't intend for there to be any "attitude", and I apologize if it seemed that way. I also didn't intend to imply that your animations were shitty; they're extraordinarily good. I thought what I wrote was just a bland expression of preference; I like normal-sized boobs, and I think there are multitudes of large-breasted characters in this genre already, so I hope you make a character with normal-sized boobs. Note that I used "hope" there -- I didn't know you were far enough along such that you'd have to remake a bunch of animations to change her bagoogidies. Yeah, if you're several animations in, then it's totally impractical to change something like that. I understand.
Also, lemme clarify what I meant by "normal-sized". I worked in a bra store for a while, and I can tell you from selling thousands of bras (and from being explicitly informed by the corporation, which trained us once every three months) that the average bra size is 34b.
[So after writing that, I looked it up: HOLY SHIT the USA is fat. The average bra size in the USA has shot up from 34b to 34dd in the past decade, attributed almost exclusively to an obesity epidemic.]
They're not. They're definitely big, but they're not absurd or whatever (or "the size of an atomic bomb"? Haha sorry couldn't resist). I was just trying to describe the ridiculous way that a lot of (mostly Japanese) game developers choose to approach choosing tits for characters, where they think size and sex appeal have a positive, linear relationship (which inevitably results in absurd basketballs-in-plastic-bags boobs).
Abnormal doesn't mean "FREAK". If your sample has 10 numbers between 1-10, and the average is 5, then 6 is abnormal. So is 4. Her boobs are objectively abnormal, as they differ from the standard (which is 34b. Well, actually, if you look at the USA, it's 34dd, so her boobs would be abnormally small haha)believe me, i'm not a fan of ridiculous breast sizes either. anything bigger than, say, a DD gets into the realms of "those should be smaller" for me. but that doesn't change that hers ARE normal. i modeled them after approximately a 38D cup size - which, sure, isn't the average, but it's a completely normal, human size, even for some girls who have thin figures. i'm not gonna base her cup size off of whatever the 'average' US girl has, or any other place in the world for that matter. it doesn't make them abnormal.
That's what matters most.i think they're sexy. sorry if not everybody likes them, but it would be unreasonable to try and please everybody.
Abnormal doesn't mean "FREAK". If your sample has 10 numbers between 1-10, and the average is 5, then 6 is abnormal. So is 4. Her boobs are objectively abnormal, as they differ from the standard (which is 34b. Well, actually, if you look at the USA, it's 34dd, so her boobs would be abnormally small haha)
Point is, our disagreement was brought about by our differing usages of the word "normal". No big deal.
[So after writing that, I looked it up: HOLY SHIT the USA is fat. The average bra size in the USA has shot up from 34b to 34dd in the past decade, attributed almost exclusively to an obesity epidemic.]