RPG RPG Maker [ディーゼルマイン / dieselmine] レーナ姫の精剣伝説 / The Legendary Cumblade of PRINCESS REINA (RE158715, RJ158715)

[chrisroxxx]

Re: (ディーゼルマイン)レーナ姫の精剣伝説

She will be the first one to reach 50 lewdness afterall.

true that, but it also has to do with the player choices, I mean if the heroines, gain sexual experience/lewdness/sexdrive at all! I think the scene with the demon lord and the princess is unavoidable though, at least to continue each day in the demon castle, unsure about the outcome of the fight, not suuure, if it has to end with an h-scene...

Ok after a couple polishes, that scene looks about right, now. Let me share Shennas final statement with you!

Spoiler

*...AAaaawhh...I fell in looove with your cooock...*

 

[chrisroxxx]

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Ok, I started to work on the damm panty sniff grab arousement scenes, since yesterday. Dropped it yesterday to translate more story, after the prologue...trying again today, but transalting these panty scenes is meeeh, hard, hard for me to feel anything arousing about it, but I try to find arousing words, it just makes it very hard to write...unlike the sex smut stuff from all the other scenes I did as of now...
I won't update so much on the forum anymore, unless it's something kinky, I will try to complete all h-scenes in the next weeks, so you people can playtest...but it is a whole lot of work, I would say I am done about 20% with the h-stuff, right now.... Before I started, I thought stuff wouldn't have to be polished sooo much, considering the h-scenes, but hey it is how it is, just saying it all willl take longer to complete...

 

[LordZero25]

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Ok after a couple polishes, that scene looks about right, now. Let me share Shennas final statement with you!

Spoiler

*...AAaaawhh...I fell in looove with your cooock...*

Where was this?

 

[chrisroxxx]

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Where was this?

hmm, it is an excerpt of shannon's last line, talk bubble with the ogre king... not so 100% sure about the love your cock thing, but it had to make sense in the end, 'call it a little extra'...well in her last 4 or 5 lines/talk bubbles shannon is practically losing her shit laughing like a madman, doing excessive dirty talk...

 

[plmnko]

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hmm, it is an excerpt of shannon's last line, talk bubble with the ogre king... not so 100% sure about the love your cock thing, but it had to make sense in the end, 'call it a little extra'...well in her last 4 or 5 lines/talk bubbles shannon is practically losing her shit laughing like a madman, doing excessive dirty talk...

Yes, she looks to lost herself and say something like that. Im not sure really but it fits

 

[autizboyz]

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hmm, it is an excerpt of shannon's last line, talk bubble with the ogre king... not so 100% sure about the love your cock thing, but it had to make sense in the end, 'call it a little extra'...well in her last 4 or 5 lines/talk bubbles shannon is practically losing her shit laughing like a madman, doing excessive dirty talk...

Well its hentai game afterall, in all solo scene like shannon with the ogre and the nun with the cerberus i believe. In the end they all fall to the pleasure so if they say "Ohh i love your cock thing" it make sense

 

[Manamana]

OK, I've tried the game, and it's already better than their first one (even if the princess in the preceding one was hotter IMO).
So, someone can explain to me how tentacles are supposed to work? My 2 heroines got them in combat, but even after sleeping and having max hp, their status show that they are still constricted..?? And then after that it disappeared, before showing up again!
What does govern their appearance?
Seems totally random to me

see there:

Spoiler

Apart from that, short pro and con about that game as I play it:

Pro:
- Dieselmine got really better with that one, I hope they keep getting even better with RPG Maker!
- Art is top notch.
- The tentacles corruption idea is awesome.
- Battle format is quite good IMO.
- Story is simple, but not too simple, which is good
- Priscila

Con:
- Sex happens way too suddenly. More gradual corruption and some foreplay would have been better.
- Tentacles appearances seem totally random, I hoped some control over them
- Needs more outfits!

 

[LordZero25]

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OK, I've tried the game, and it's already better than their first one (even if the princess in the preceding one was hotter IMO).
So, someone can explain to me how tentacles are supposed to work? My 2 heroines got them in combat, but even after sleeping and having max hp, their status show that they are still constricted..?? And then after that it disappeared, before showing up again!
What does govern their appearance?
Seems totally random to me

Lewdness: 0 - up to level 1 tentacles
Lewdness 35 - up to level 2 tentacles
Lewdness ~75 - up to level 3 tentacles

If you deplete their SP to 0 the tentacles should go away (in effect after the battle), and if your lewdness is ~75 or above:
SP ~20 - level 1 tentacles
SP ~50 - level 2 tentacles
SP ~90 - level 3 tentacles

I hope this makes sense.

 

[Manamana]

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Lewdness: 0 - up to level 1 tentacles
Lewdness 35 - up to level 2 tentacles
Lewdness ~75 - up to level 3 tentacles

If you deplete their SP to 0 the tentacles should go away (in effect after the battle), and if your lewdness is ~75 or above:
SP ~20 - level 1 tentacles
SP ~50 - level 2 tentacles
SP ~90 - level 3 tentacles

I hope this makes sense.

Yep, makes sense, thanks

 

[AExMachina]

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It's not tied to SP, it's tied to TP (the green bar) instead.

 

[Manamana]

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It's not tied to SP, it's tied to TP (the green bar) instead.

Yep, I thought about that one anyway ^^

 

[chrisroxxx]

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small update:
...panty scenes are nrly all translated, man doing these scenes was tough shit for me, took like forever, just need to sync all of them to the bgm files now...
Sofia's/orc paizuri/bj scenes are done too, also need some syncing there. I started working on the demon castle stuff now, so many vocalizations there, just finished syncing my first scene, and it was quite alot of huff huff nghhah uuuuaaah...whatever sounds......

Also hentai_fan vouched to help me out a bit, by translating some of the menus, items and descriptions and maybe some h-scenes he is unsure about h-scenes, yet...well I hooked him up with the tools to do so.
I am really happy that I am not all alone on this project no more, when it comes to the transaltion stuff...also many thanks to the playtesters, thanks alot for all your feedback...it helps alot!

I realy hope this will become a well translated game, that alot of people will enjoy...

 

[suiton]

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small update:
...panty scenes are nrly all translated, man doing these scenes was tough shit for me, took like forever, just need to sync all of them to the bgm files now...
Sofia's/orc paizuri/bj scenes are done too, also need some syncing there. I started working on the demon castle stuff now, so many vocalizations there, just finished syncing my first scene, and it was quite alot of huff huff nghhah uuuuaaah...whatever sounds......

Also hentai_fan vouched to help me out a bit, by translating some of the menus, items and descriptions and maybe some h-scenes he is unsure about h-scenes, yet...well I hooked him up with the tools to do so.
I am really happy that I am not all alone on this project no more, when it comes to the transaltion stuff...also many thanks to the playtesters, thanks alot for all your feedback...it helps alot!

I realy hope this will become a well translated game, that alot of people will enjoy...

are you doing a translation or a rewrite of the h-scenes?

 

[chrisroxxx]

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are you doing a translation or a rewrite of the h-scenes?

well inevitably every translation catches some of your own flavour...I intend to keep the 'basic meaning', but use 'fun smutty language' since the original author is a bit repetitive in his use of words when it comes to smut like: vagina vagina vagina vagina uterus uterus uterus uterus uterus penis penis penis penis cock cock cock cock, no fun realy to read the same words repeated a dozen times in one h-scene...and the next one and the next...so yah I keep the 'basic meaning' but I also get creative, that's why I want alot of playtesters, to get me some feedback on how they like it, and what could/should be changed...to make reading the smut talk more enjoyable...

 

[Hinotori]

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well inevitably every translation catches some of your own flavour...I intend to keep the 'basic meaning', but use 'fun smutty language' since the original author is a bit repetitive in his use of words when it comes to smut like: vagina vagina vagina vagina uterus uterus uterus uterus uterus penis penis penis penis cock cock cock cock, no fun realy to read the same words repeated a dozen times in one h-scene...and the next one and the next...so yah I keep the 'basic meaning' but I also get creative, that's why I want alot of playtesters, to get me some feedback on how they like it, and what could/should be changed...to make reading the smut talk more enjoyable...

Thanks for doing a translation! What are the tools you use to assist in translation? I tried to do a partial for a game, and ended up purchasing VX Ace to do some database editing on my own. But it's quite clunky to go through events and common events line by line and translate it like that.

 

[chrisroxxx]

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Thanks for doing a translation! What are the tools you use to assist in translation? I tried to do a partial for a game, and ended up purchasing VX Ace to do some database editing on my own. But it's quite clunky to go through events and common events line by line and translate it like that.

I am using rpg maker vx ace for the decryption and then encryption of the sourcefiles, azdie wrote a nice script for me that can do just that, all the story dialogue lines and all the h-scene smut talk is stored in the sourcefiles. Editing the Data folder, that's basically where all the informaiton about items, menus, player choices, area names, common city encounters with npc's *common events.txt* like for example: Here stuff is stored when you speak with one of the knights in the castle and he answers with like 2 generic lines..., also all the battle notification menus and stuff is stored in here... for all this stuff in the Data folder of the game I use ytinasni's tool it works without the rpg maker!

And ya the common event.txt is quite big/clunky, but once you read the code for a while, you just need to watch out for these 2 lines ShowMessage("message") and ShowChoicesString("message") there is some other lines that make area names appear in the top left of the screen and other command lines for the in battle stuff, but once you read these .txt's for some time you know what to look for it ain't that hard...

for the sourcefiles it looks different, this is the first line from Sofia's final bj scene with the orc...

Spoiler

[Sofia/sof0117]「Good God...sliick...your penis is reeking so badly...smoooch...hmm...is all that smelly dickcheese just for meee?...sssliick...mhm...here goes nothing, time to take a good whiff and clean up this mess!...mhhm...mmh...hmm...sluuurp...sliiickk...smooch...gaah...hah...hmm...」

 

[lkkyo]

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I am using rpg maker vx ace for the decryption and then encryption of the sourcefiles, azdie wrote a nice script for me that can do just that, all the story dialogue lines and all the h-scene smut talk is stored in the sourcefiles. Editing the Data folder, that's basically where all the informaiton about items, menus, player choices, area names, common city encounters with npc's *common events.txt* like for example: Here stuff is stored when you speak with one of the knights in the castle and he answers with like 2 generic lines..., also all the battle notification menus and stuff is stored in here... for all this stuff in the Data folder of the game I use ytinasni's tool it works without the rpg maker!

And ya the common event.txt is quite big/clunky, but once you read the code for a while, you just need to watch out for these 2 lines ShowMessage("message") and ShowChoicesString("message") there is some other lines that make area names appear in the top left of the screen and other command lines for the in battle stuff, but once you read these .txt's for some time you know what to look for it ain't that hard...

for the sourcefiles it looks different, this is the first line from Sofia's final bj scene with the orc...

Spoiler

[Sofia/sof0117]「Good God...sliick...your penis is reeking so badly...smoooch...hmm...is all that smelly dickcheese just for meee?...sssliick...mhm...here goes nothing, time to take a good whiff and clean up this mess!...mhhm...mmh...hmm...sluuurp...sliiickk...smooch...gaah...hah...hmm...」

wwowowoowow your doing a translation right now? should i wait, or just play the game... i guess i should wait for a better gaming experience

 

[chrisroxxx]

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wwowowoowow your doing a translation right now? should i wait, or just play the game... i guess i should wait for a better gaming experience

Well I started a couple weeks after the game was released, h-scenes about 50% translated 20% polished/synced. Story prologue and first chapter done, but it will probably take 1 or 2 more months until it's done 100%...so you better just play, thanks to the many variations of h-scenes the game has alot of replayability considering the h-content so don't worry(it's like 30 cg's but about half of them have 5+ variations with totally different smut talk in it and every scene has like 300 lines of smut talk so it's like about 100+ different scenes with roughly 300 lines each and that's just the h-stuff in the game...story dialogue is fun swell, I added some famous movie quotes in the prologue, if you watch out for 'em...), it won't ruin your fun...also I am always looking for playtesters, pm me your fetish favourite heroine and I will send you the files with just that stuff translated, so you can give me some feedback, I am always looking for feedback on the h-stuff, story stuff to make the final translation better...

 

[nightmare3410]

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Keep up the good work, man.

 

[YaliJin]

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Can't wait for the translation! people like you are a godsend to this community.