Tales from Sin

[Sinfulwolf]

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Too bad about Mordred though, he was always my personal favorite even if he is a bastard in every way possible.

Indeed, but it wouldn't work as well to bring him back with the plot I have in mind.

 

[dmronny]

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Finally I got around to finishing up to where you ended off. Almost forgot about to be honest though, since I've been more focused elsewhere of late.

I'm hooked and now I can't wait for the rest. Aside from one or two spelling errors I noticed, 'twas great.

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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And so my fangs sink deep. Haha.
I'm working on chapter 6 now. Harder than I assumed this particular portion. Oh well, it's coming along.

Glad you enjoy it.

 

[dmronny]

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It actually didn't seem as flowery as I originally thought the more I got into it. It's almost like each chapter just gets grittier and grittier, like a good horror movie.

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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Hmm, not something I originally noticed, or remember consciously doing. Sometimes things just have a way of working out. Still, since it's working, I hope I can keep it up, though I have a feeling Chapter 6 is a bit more flowery once again.

 

[dmronny]

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I think it may just be that some parts have a lot more action to them and therefore seem a bit more gritty. Doesn't detract from the story whatsoever though so just keep it up.

Chapter 6 was great though it really just raised more questions in mind. Which is a good thing since it keeps me hooked.

 

[Wonderboy]

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More, faster, quicker and longer!

I'm hooked!

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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Haha, well hopefully I'll get the next part up faster. Glad the responders are enjoying.

Hopefully Ronny the questions I'm raising are ones I mean to, and not things I have not explained properly after thinking I had.

 

[dmronny]

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I pretty sure they weren't answered or at least not fully yet. At least that's what I hope because otherwise it would mean I'm completely oblivious and probably shouldn't be reading

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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I pretty sure they weren't answered or at least not fully yet. At least that's what I hope because otherwise it would mean I'm completely oblivious and probably shouldn't be reading

Nah, it would mean I didn't do a good job relaying information. What are the questions you have anyway? I won't give any answers, but I just want to make sure I'm doing what I should be.

 

[dmronny]

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Well I'm mostly curious as to what Du Lac is up to, and why he isn't heading home with his king.

That and I'm quite curious about the different clans and why they're fighting suddenly after all these years.

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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Ah okay good, all stuff I've yet to explain.

 

[dmronny]

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I think I liked this part that chapter the best so far, though they're all good. Just keeps drawing me in so that I want to see more and more.

There is one little part that seems to bother me a little. In this quote from the story did you mean she's holding up the longbow in her fist or is she holding the bow in one hand and making the stop signal with the other or am I just misreading again.

"holding up a tight fist holding her longbow against the ground"

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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Ah. Perhaps I should reword it. It is meaning she's holding up one hand, while holding her longbow down with the other.

 

[dmronny]

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Well it's up to you, since I still figured out what you were aiming for just took me a little longer is all.

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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Yes well, the more people that can read it smoothly the better.

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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After St. Michael's Seraphim I'm now back to full work on War of the Damned. Chapter 8 should be coming up by next week, though if I get enough motivation may have it done by the end of this week. We'll see what happens.

More sex in the next chapter too.

 

[Wonderboy]

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I just read the new chapter...
It's fantastic!

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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Very glad ye enjoyed it.

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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Gah, the crippling blow of writer's block. It strikes me now as I try to push out chapter 9. Fucking hell.