Re: [Yuri] Rainy day
So I don't have this full game, but I played the demo and it kind of made me irritated for a few reasons.
Mainly because, with slightly better mechanics and art, it could been something I really enjoyed. It's kind of horrible how little h-game content there is that includes lesbians. If you're lucky, you'll get one h-scene in a game otherwise entirely about dicking. But strictly yuri stuff? Forget about it, unless it's a specific kind of visual novel.
So, the fact that this is yuri alone is pretty great, but it also checks a bunch of other boxes for me. Like: somewhat interesting gameplay, clothing used as a health system, game over rape (as opposed to the game just going on).
In the hands of someone slightly more talented this could have been a totally bonerrific game. And I'll admit, if I could actually read the text it might have enhanced the experience somewhat. However, with the simple sprites and very limited CG, I just saw it mostly as a missed opportunity. For instance, every time the girl gets caught there should be a CG of that item of clothing being ripped off. At least for starters.
And, of course, gameplay elements could be improved. At the very least give the chasing girl more lag time to enter a room. Getting instantly caught from the back because you didn't move immediately forward is a little silly. And, I don't know how much bigger the full game is, but some more variety in the scenes wouldn't hurt.
It's times like this I wish I could draw, because I could definitely design a game in RPG maker similar to this that plays better.