Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Pretty damned solid translation as far as I can tell - as expected of Ritsu.
As far as awkward-sounding phrases go, I'd say this is probably better than the Vampire Hunter one, even.
Granted, I most certainly can't say I actually understand the whole "Blank test" thing in the skippable setup, so that could use some clarification.
Anyway, as to slightly odd phrases and errors:
Appears in multiple places
Odd phrases
Anytime you have "
Letting out such voice" or "
letting out such voices" or anything like that, you'd want to put "
making noises like that" or something.
During the conversation segment of the game
Odd phrases
"I care about it, so it's all right"
I don't know exactly what that's saying, but from the CONTEXT it sounds like she's saying that she's careful not to expose herself or something.
"I take care not to allow that, so it's all right"?
Or maybe
I'm careful not to allow that, so it's all right"?
I don't know.
The above is obtained by looking at her skirt.
Untranslated Dialogue
After "Do you like my legs that much?" The teacher has untranslated dialogue in his text box.
The above is obtained by investigating the story, basically, and looking at her legs as well.
Non-Ending Scenes
Untranslated Dialogue
In the "put it in yourself" scene, the girl has some untranslated text.
The above shows up after "Hyaa, please don't cum inside me anymore".
Lewd Ending
"Does this turn you on so much sensei?"
Could probably stand to be
Does this turn you on
that much, sensei?
Or something like that. Dunno exactly what she's saying, but just "so much" out of nowhere doesn't seem like ordinary English construction.
The above is obtained by choosing "very fast" and letting the text scroll, in the Lewd ending.
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The above is obtained by hitting "very fast" and then "cum" immediately afterwards, for the first time in the Lewd Ending.
As to the game itself:
Lewd ending's my favourite by an infinitely long shot, unsurprisingly.
Incidentally, for the Lewd ending in Shion, all I found to be necessary was to max her submission bar and then make her cum 3 or more times before you ordered a sex scene.
Doesn't even matter if she really enjoyed the scene or not, her dialogue from the "stop" option will say that she did, and you get your ending.
I have no idea what effect the dialogue choices during the first part of the game have on endings, but if you just
1) command her clothes off to begin with,
2) always choose all top dialogue options, and
3)use the "look" button to actually get the submission bar up in between dialogues,
things work out.