Re: Another Dimension Heavy Ryona Game
With one small exception of the stage 2/3 intermission, I think the author is building the character very well. She does not have a mind of 10 yo. She is just an ordinary schoolgirl, that suddenly is placed in a place beyond her understanding and put to extreme stress. I am sure that you were often in situations when you called for help of any force in existence, 'If I get out of this mess I will be a better person'. Well, I bet you were never put to anything as extreme as Allie. She is terrified and is slowly loosing her mind. She is not a Rambo type of girl and perhaps she does not have a mind strong enough to start thinking more clearly, but I find this very realistic.
Having said that I think the shirt/portal scene was the point where the character behaved too stupidly. It could possibly happen, with her instinctively grabbing her shirt, just to get pulled in, but the way it is implemented, where you control character and know exactly what will happen if you try to reach for the shirt is not too convincing.
Other than that I find the character to be well build. The author does a good job at presenting a mindset of a person put into extremely stressful situation.