Re: A very hesitant Attempt...
Not really positive or negative criticism, but I kinda like how her hair looks like its own mass of tentacles. And that's why the tentacle mass is attacking her. Love at first sight.
I'm glad you like it! Perhaps a bit too much?
Somehow you made me notice that, thanks!
If you can, try to draw a pose or H-artwork at a closer (or focus) shot. That's a fundamental a fair amount of H-artists take upon as they present their works.
A close-up I'm talking about tends to, for example, omit the lower legs. This kind of practice can give you some freedom for camera angles.
Hmmm..what do you mean? Like a portion of the body? Like in comics?
Maybe is a bit too early for that...I still need to focus a lot on technique and proportions...don't you think?
Or explain it to me better, I think I may have misunderstand.
Thanks a lot for the feedback though!
Wow Vicissitudo, those last two pieces you've shown here are great!
Can I ask what programs you use?
Also,
Do you use the mouse, or have a pad, maybe a tablet?
Eheheh, well thanks! I'm trying my best!
I use Photoshop and an Intuos Pro M. I've bought it myself last Christmas but I never had time/motivation to practice with it.
Now, since I opened this thread, I'm enjoying it a lot and I use it almost daily (not for hentai only but for other things too). So you guys are actually helping me a lot.
Somewhere I read that "The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt." And it's true...and I've been doubting of myself for too long. Now I feel that I start, slowly, to recover some self esteem for my graphic arts. Thanks!
Here I tried to speed-sketch another position, sort of perspective-top view.
The first attempt was a disaster...and took me a while...
The second attempt is still a bit wretched but I believe it looks a bit better.
Once again I focused on speed. Done the second attempt from zero in 30 minutes.
First disastrous attempt...open at your own risk...