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Scanty

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Re: Tentacle Hive

Alright, I know fledgling CYOAs end up a dime a dozen, but screw it, here's something worth less than a penny.

Oh, and if you're a writer and need someone to clean up your grammar, I can help with that. I'm a great speller, I know which version of your/'re you're looking to use.
I hope it is not too late for me, because if you want to go i have to choose, but first I want you to forgive me for my late entry, without a doubt a bit of your help would be good for me.

Well my choice is the following: B this would be a spice of NINJA with tentacles. Can you imagine? It would be epic. very fast!
For me it is perfect.

B. Hunter: A fast, stealthy tentacle. Easily the fastest mover of the tentacles. Typically, they make up the bulk of the tentacles sent out to capture escapees. As such, they are good trackers and have superior senses on top of their great darting speed. A common tactic in the forest is to travel swinging from tree limbs from their tentacles and attack out of the air on top of their prey. During the wars with the humans, they developed a clever adaptation, a solid retractable, bone-like spear point extending from about 1/4th away from the head. When humans began raiding and attacking, the tentacles didn't have an answer for their new armors, like plate and chain, and they just had to beat them into submission. Now, these tentacles can strike fast and deliver painful stabs through the armor, either to wound or kill, depending on the current situation. Coupling with this role, they also have a great knowledge of human anatomy, for fighting and for feeding. When feeding, they give the greatest pleasure, hitting all the right spots, rapidly, over and over again until she just gives in. They start out roughly 6 feet in length and the thickness of a similarly sized snake. They grow into a roughly wolf sized mass with 3 long tentacles sprouting from it, allowing them to take a different tactic, ambushing from above with a tentacle disguised like a vine. Their smaller size means they can be away from the hive or a food source for longer than the fighters. They are also fairly clever, setting ambushes and disguising themselves as tree roots and vines. Work best in packs.

B.

"Uncle Tentacle always said: Nothing beats corrupting a virgin."

Oh! And seeing the sights; the hive gets boring after a while.
I think that I share your opinion, it is certainly a stylish comment. I could say that speaks very well. I like!
 

Caranthir

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Not as bad as I had expected.
Ach, it's a bit of free energy against the cost of being a little bit dizzy for an hour or so, I'm not expecting any other opportunities, and who knows, maybe she'll become useful later on.

I'd say A, take the deal, but do keep a metaphorical eye out for trouble.

After that, let her off to her work, and stress her that while it's fine to negotiate with us, the others will just ship her off to the hive.(Think of it as hedging our bets, if she's too scared to try and talk to others, she'll be coming back to us for more ingrediënts, human greed and all that.)
^ This sounds good; if there's a chance to develop something akin to a 'business relationship' with that witch, we should definitely take it. So if the, ahem, 'transactions' go well, we could suggest a second meeting, and maybe suggest that she could bring an assistant next time...
 

Zephyrion

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B. This is a raw deal guys, there's all sorts of ways to control people through magic when you have a piece of their body, or better yet their blood.

This is why the Tooth fairy came about, so parents could collect and safely destroy their children's lost teeth so evil mages couldn't use them for magics most foul.
 
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TentacularFortitude

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A.

"Acceptable. Off with the robe and open up.", you say.

"Not the most ceremonious species, that's for sure," the witch grumbles while undoing the ties on her robe, starting with the dark red leather cinch around her waist. She first bears her shoulders, pushing her small breasts up, making them look bigger than they are. She then slides the robe off in one motion, leaving it crumpled at her feet. She's not wearing anything underneath. Wordlessly, she lays down on the nearest sandy patch of shore she can find and spreads her legs. You follow her like a dog follows a bone.

As you near her entrance, you can tell she's barely even moist. You begin sliding your length through her lips, rubbing and flicking at her clit to get her juices flowing.

"What are you doing?", She asks, "This isn't part of the deal."

"What? I figured you'd appreciate it. I've heard going in dry can be painful." She gives a humph and allows you to continue.

After working over her a bit, she's now quite hot and wet, her flushed face contrasting with the cool of the night. You proceed to line yourself up with her hot honeypot and enter her deeply in a single thrust. She gives a small, slightly distressed cry, apparently not that familiar with the sensations that sex brings on, though she wasn't a virgin. Her interior reflects that inexperience. She is quite tight, providing a wonderful stimulation for you. Using your senses, you find her most sensitive spot, just before her womb. You go in deep and hit your mark again and again. She's steadily losing her tough front. Her moans are sounding less stressed and more lustful as time goes on, though she's not completely relaxed either, still feeling she has to be on guard. You decide to switch it into high gear, using your types natural accuracy and speed to piston her harder, faster, and deeper than any man could. For just a moment, she forgets herself. She starts screaming her pleasure into the night, rapidly approaching her orgasm. Just as she's on the cusp, you go stiff and release right into her womb, filling it up, the best way for her to be able to keep the semen for now. This new pumping, rippling sensation sends her over the edge, and she cums, releasing her energy while you take a measured amount of it, about the 35% you agreed to. She's positively bursting with energy. Even with her failed ritual, she has far and away more energy than those other normal girls you had.

"I had no idea you creatures were so good at that.", she says a bit groggy after the experience. "Glad to see you didn't scarper off while I was... occupied."

"A deal was made. You might want one of your jars. You're leaking." Cum was steadily dripping out of her pussy and being wasted on the ground. "I'll take care of the slime. Just place this jar on the ground here." You slide your length along the rim of the jar, focusing on putting out as much slime as possible. You're rejuvenated, so it doesn't take much stress to get the required amount out.

"Now, I'll have my blood.", Says the witch after she finished scraping the semen out of her pussy.

"Fine." You arch around and ready your needle for the unnatural act of cutting yourself. You aim near the end of your tail and cut a shallow gash. The witch swoops in with her vial and quickly collects the blood she asked for.

"Please, wait a second." She says as she puts a stopper in the vial. She puts her hand on your cut.

"What are you doing?" You say taken aback by the sudden contact. You know she's a magic user, you ready your needle just in case.

"Sarcio!" She shouts. You feel a small part of power flow into you and you feel your bleeding stop and your cut mend. "You made me enjoy myself. You didn't have to do that. I wanted to return the favor."

"If you need anything, perhaps we could work out a similar deal. I'd love to have you again, you're simply bursting with energy.", You call to her, "But be careful. Most other tentacles would seek to just take, maybe even bring you back to the hive if they could."

"Oh, cut the shit. We both know you'd have tried it if you could have managed it. Furthermore, it'd take a lot of your kind to take me." She says a bit menacingly. Suddenly, she begins chanting in that unrecognizable language again and raises her hands above her head, shooting a phoenix made of fire out over the lake that dissipates in the center. She is definitely more powerful than she let on.

You're taken aback. "If you could do that, why did you bother making a deal with me?"

"You could probably escape. Magic, at least the spells fast enough to hit a being like yourself, is not easy to perform. That phoenix is really only good for a show, and it's not very energy intensive.", she explains, "Finally, I'm not averse to another deal if we cross paths, but I'll leave that to fate" She finishes dawning her robe and walks off into the thick woods.

You head the opposite direction heading back towards the path, reaching it fairly quickly in the pre-morning light.

You feel yourself growing larger once again! This time another whole foot is added along with a quarter inch of width.

Decision time!

A. Continue your solo adventure, heading along the path looking for new prey.
B. Head back to the hive.

Evolutions available

1. Sleep compound. Add the ability to knock enemies out with your needle. Useful for neutralizing interfering men without having to kill them.
2. Advanced stealth. Through some focus, you can mask yourself even from magical detection.

Status:
Hunter
Energy: 110/110(you lose energy steadily while you travel outside the hive)
Health: 73/75
EXP: 675/900
Size: 8.5 feet long, 2.25 in in diameter.
 

Iwanako

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A, we still have plenty of time, and 2, I think I'd rather not be seen than better able to put them to sleep, death or crippling injuries work just as well for now.
 

maxentius-septimus

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Re: Tentacle Hive

A1 both of those upgrades are pretty tempting, and we still have lots of energy to keep going.
 

Caranthir

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A1 sounds good, I think. A non-lethal method to deal with interlopers sure is useful.
Also, we should remember two things: First, that dealing with at least some humans is possible, and second, that we should be _really_ careful around robe-wearers. :D
 

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A2. Sleep needle can come later if we have a chance to acquire it again.

Also, are we allowed only one evolution per level up? And some energy cost protip like in TS would be appreciated.
 

Scanty

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Re: Tentacle Hive

A.
Status:
Hunter
Energy: 110/110(you lose energy steadily while you travel outside the hive)
Health: 73/75
EXP: 675/900
Size: 8.5 feet long, 2.25 in in diameter.
Energy: 110/110(you lose energy steadily while you travel outside the hive)

Advanced stealth Strategy
Well, I can choose A2

In my opinion it would return to the routine, my idea would be move forward using the protection stealth, to others with this advantage could rest and recover energy while i'm hidden.
The idea would be attacking the prey by surprise as a murderer cautious.

"Living An adventure more"
 

Minerve

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A2. Sleep needle can come later if we have a chance to acquire it again.

Also, are we allowed only one evolution per level up? And some energy cost protip like in TS would be appreciated.
Yeah but it's already done... I like it that way, personally.

And I change to A2.
 

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A2 of course, it seems like there are lots of magic users in this world.
 
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Ok, a general energy drain of about 5 an hour will occur(5 due to being a hunter) when you're outside the hive. It can obviously be replenished by fucking a girl. I'll try to make sure I include measurements of time in every post so you can get a sense how long you can stay out there.

Health will regenerate very slowly outside the hive, very quickly inside the hive. There are a few potential upgrades to speed up your healing process(soldiers would have a whole bunch).

Some upgrades are mutually exclusive, like the spear and hollow needle, you can't get a spear until you have multiple tentacles now. I'll usually only offer 2-4 upgrades at a time.

A2

Your experience with the witch has informed you that you aren't as stealthy as you need to be. You begin to focus on an image of yourself, you can see your aura. Now you try to manipulate it, making it weaker, smaller, harder to detect.

New Ability: Advanced Stealth Through some focus, you can hide yourself even from magical means of detection. You will burn through energy at an increased rate when you do this.

The sun is starting to rise, but that just means there should be more normal prey out on the roads. You decide to head in a new direction for a while, heading around the lake and then towards the north. After about an hour of travel you hear horse hooves clopping on cobble stones as the trees you're traveling through get thinner. You finally get a look at this road, it's much wider than the path you've been hunting on, about 15 feet wide with most of the trees and brush cleared away another 5 feet on either side, limiting your cover. A 2 by 2 line of horses are marching by. The riders are armed and armored, not uniformly, most are men, but some are women, armed and armored like the men. These aren't peasants, slaves, or even witches, they look like a mercenary company. It would be best to steer clear of these types. A horse is difficult to outrun even for you.

You wait patiently waiting for them to pass, horseshoes clopping off into the distance. You begin heading alongside this main road in the opposite direction from the mercenary band. There's significant traffic on this road, but no good targets. The groups are too large or too close together.

You remain undetected, anyone who hears the trees rustle due to your movements just assumes it's a squirrel. Finally, another hour later, you come across a fork in the road. Another dirt path, similar to the earlier one, but a bit larger, merges with the cobblestone main road.

A. Take the new path.
B. Stay on the main road.
C. Head back to the hive.


Option 1. Wait near the road until dark, then move out.(note, this will take 12 hours and cost the correct amount of energy)
Option 2. Move out now.

Status:
Hunter
Energy: 100/110(you lose energy steadily while you travel outside the hive)
Health: 74/75
EXP: 675/900
Size: 8.5 feet long, 2.25 in in diameter.
 
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