Re: Part 6.
I think I have made a good fix. Go to the part where Rose offers to help Celia to see how I changed things.
Inventory:
1000 credit. (( In Gauntlet computer ))
Equips:
Head:
Neck:
Shoulders:
Upper Body: Blue body suit.
Hands:
Right: Suit gauntlet.
Left:
Waist and below: Blue body suit.
Celia watched as the purple gorilla screamed out in horrible pain. Her blast had slammed into the monsters back. All of the hair in the area that got hit was gone, all there was now was charred and and destroyed skin. The big ape was really mad now. He was slamming his fists into the ground and screaming. Celia stood up from the ground and got ready to aim and fire, however the purple ape saw what she was about to do and bolted at her. Before Celia could dodge or fire the ape got ahold of her, squeezing her within his big meaty right hand. Celia screamed out in pain as the ape began to crush her. The pain was horrible, she felt her bones starting to break from pressure. However, before she was crushed the ape threw Celia like a rag doll, she landed twenty yards away on her back. Sadly the ground in this clearing was not soft with green grass, it was hard with brown soil. Celia gritted her teeth from pain upon impact.
On the ground Celia gasped for air. Her body ached horribly. The big, purple, gorilla/ape thing was staring at Celia with his big, bright, red eyes, enjoying her suffering. Celia knew he was just going to continue doing this until she died, it was like a game to it. She was going to have to kill it and fast! Celia had a plan. it was a bit risky but it could work. Celia painfully stood up from the ground. As fast as she could she bolted away and out of the clearing into the thick jungle of purple and dark blue trees. As Celia sprinted as fast as she could she felt the light blue grass again, she heard the ape screaming and chasing after her, breaking down the purple and blue trees along the way. As Celia ran she activated her gauntlets laser options, her laser began charging up. Celia knew a standard blast wouldn't be enough to kill the ape, however a charged up blast would be enough to kill it. Celia stopped running and got down on her knees, her body still aching, and hid behind a thick, blue, tree. She was going to hide here until the ape found her, which was pretty quick. After only a minute the ape soon found where Celia was and smashed the tree Celia was hiding behind, it went smashing to the left and onto the ground.
Celia then took this chance and aimed her gauntlet. The Ape went to grab her again but it was to late, her laser fired and blasted the ape right in the face. The big charge shot completely obliterated the monsters head, there was nothing left above the beast shoulders. After the shot had been fired the big, purple haired covered body fell to the ground. Celia had killed the beast. Now she could return to the blonde womens ship. But before she did, she inspected the beast. This thing was so much like an Earth ape. It was as if an Earth ape had been taken to this planet, mutated, and grew giant and its fur turned to a shade of purple. Then again maybe life on this planet was like Earths. Celia didn't really care at the moment.
Celia limped her way back to the clearing and made her way to the blonde womens ship. Celia couldn't help but notice its red color. It was the same shade of red as the womens body suit. Celia got to the side door and knocked on it. The door flung open and the blonde woman was there to greet Celia. She seemed relieved and happy. The woman helped Celia inside and shut the door. As soon as Celia got in she collapsed to the ground from pain and exhaustion. Celia muttered out " Its... Its dead..." The woman got on her knees and made eye contact, Celia saw that she had a smile on her face, the woman said said " I'm glad you survived Celia. To be honest I thought that beast was going to rip you apart. But now that its dead and you're alive we may have a chance of surviving."
Celia listened, feeling proud of herself. She had managed to save someone and kill a monster. She just wished she could get off this rock and report back to H.Q. Celia then thought of something. She didn't know this womens name. Celia Opened her lips and said " Ma'am, what's your name?" The woman did a fake sounding laugh and replied " I'm Rose, please call me that instead of Ma'am. Ma'am makes me feel old." The woman did another fake sounding laugh after her last statement, then continued talking. " Celia... Seems you got a little banged up. You have some bruises on you... Maybe I could... Make you feel a little better. Would you like some pain relievers to ease your pain? " Celia got herself up and leaned on a wall, she answered " No thanks. My body doesn't react well to pain releivers. It always has a weird effect on me." Whenever Celia took them her mind went all loopy and she didn't act herself.
Rose nodded. She then walked to the other side of the ship and sat down. Celia had seen right through the woman. Even though she smiled and talked nice and laughed a few times she was very sad and disturbed at the moment. Being trapped on a strange planet and having your entire crew die in front of you was a lot for a person to go through. Celia was going to have to help her get through this, if she didn't there was a good chance she would kill herself or do something else that was crazy.
So as of now Celia was trapped on a weird planet inside a strangers ship, laying down on the floor next to a wall, after killing a monster ape. Celia wondered what her next move should be.
Events:
No good idea for an event at the moment. Just say what you want to see next and ill try to make something out of everyones suggestions.