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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

this is one of those semi-sacrifice options, so the optimal situation of everyone carrying the woman on their back is not available, for story building purposes, you can still bring her back right now, but xozz will use alot of his remaining power.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

H No more compromises! We're saving everyone! Have everyone take turns dragging that woman back if we have too. There's too big of a chance that Purple Jerks or Black Hearts will come get her, and they're already too powerful to be allowed to have their way.
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

o lawd, option H. has arrived.
 

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i think option H is the best one. and i have to say 1 tell leon where the lair is. we are going to need all the help we can get.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

Eh. I also choose H 1. We are meant to ve better then purple and black after all aren't we?
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

H 1 is the best option and i would like to see what Lazuli has to say about LEON
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

im out of town for the weekend, so ill be updating this sunday or monday.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

G.

I still don't trust Leon, and frankly I'd rather get back to Lazuli as quickly as possible. One woman is not worth the risk of Lazuli being weakened at this point. I'd say ditch the woman entirely, but I still don't like the idea of Leon knowing where our lair is.
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

(H1)

"We're taking this woman back to the lair with us if it kills us all, we need to gather the women, not leave them behind so purple is lured to the beach by her scent" Olivia states

"Olivia, this woman can barely walk, the purple tentacles drained most of her energy" Laura says back to her.

"They must already be on the beach in that case, theres no way she made it through the kingswood otherwise" Olivia replies, looking around the beach for signs of them.

"We must get back to the lair as quickly as possible, the woman will slow us down" Xozz says to Olivia.

"Ill drag her through the sands myself if i have to!"

Olivia picks up the woman by the waist and begins dragging her along the sand, the rest of the party looks on, concerned with her frustration.

Olivia carries the woman as far as she can before she needs a rest due to exhaustion, Xozz and Leon both take turns with her, it takes several hours to travel with the woman, much longer than it might have taken if you simply left her behind.

Once Olivia's group reaches the Lair, she immediately senses that something is wrong, she puts the woman onto xozz for him to handle her the rest of the way and observes the entrance to the lair.

"Oh shit" Olivia says plainly as she sees the tracks in front of the lair, many things have slithered in and out of the lair since you have been gone, the sand is lightly coated with slime.....a darker shade of slime.

Olivia looks at her hands to make sure she is still a princess, her light blue tinge of flesh exist exists and she can feel her muscles coarse with power, meaning that lazuli is still alive, olivia breaks into a full sprint to get back inside of the lair.....

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Olivia feels the meatwall beneath her feet beginning to deteriorate, its slimy texture feels unhealthy and softer than it should be, the dark slime has yet to be absorbed by it, another sign that something has gone terrible wrong.

Olivia enters the lair and takes a look around the room, she looks on in horror as the signs of violence are everywhere.

Tentacle sentinels lay lifelessly on the ground, some severed in half, others crushed to death, even the tentacle abductor lives dead in a corner, bleeding its blue slime-blood all over the floor.

All of the women are gone, the lone male hangs against the wall by himself, his pants down and cold blood dripping down his neck and onto the nearly just as lifeless meatwall.

Olivia runs up to lazuli who is weakened by the lack of women in the lair, several of his tentacles have been damaged, others have been severed completely, blue slime leaks from his severed tentacles, causing him to grow weaker by the moment.

Olivia drops to her knees and tears begin to pour down her face.

"What happened?" as she puts her arms around it

"Black tentacles came.......they wanted everyone..."

"Why did you fight them?" olivia smiles to her overlord as much as she can

"i couldn't...i..."

the rest of your party hastily makes their way down the halls of the lair, and immediately laura is taken back by the horrors in front of her, the rest of your party moves around to investigate.

"Olivia.....Olivia...listen..to me" Lazuli tries to regain his strength

Olivia raises her head to listen, her face covered with tears

"Orange....was attacked...by them.... April told me before...she...was taken..."

"Orange was attacked by Black? why didn't she say something earlier?"

"i dont....know.."

"lazuli you need to rest, you need to regain your strength"

"Olivia....my.....beautiful girl....my child...it is.....too late for...me"

"no...." Olivia puts her head down into her hands crying even harder, unable to hold back her tears for her beloved overlord.

"please.....dont.......cry.....Oli....v.ia" Olivia opens her hands and hugs Lazuli tears streaming down her face, with it's last ounce of strength two tentacles wrap around Olivia to give her a big hug, shortly afterwards its remaining tentacles slide down her skin and drop to the ground around her, lifelessly, Olivia drops to her knees, the blood-slime of her master soaking the ground beneath them as Olivia's skin slowly converts from light-blue to white.

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several minutes later, Olivia gets off of the ground, her hair, breasts and skin have all returned to normal, but her mind is intact, she walks up to Xozz, her body covered in slime.

"There is nothing we could have done Olivia, this lair was attacked several hours ago, likely while we were still at pink's lair" Xozz says to her.

"If only i was here for him, i could have....i could"

"Olivia, you would have either died with him or been taken captive with the others"

"How could this happen Xozz?"

"I dont know, they either found our lair with blind luck, or they have inside help"

"April." Olivia states plainly

"April?" Xozz asks, confused

"Lazuli told me before he died that orange was attacked by black as well and april told him before she was 'taken'. "

"I suppose it is possible, but she would have had to be planning this for a while if that is the case."

"I'm going to kill her"

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Laura inspects the corpse of the man against the wall, his throat sliced open and his pants down, she cant quite understand it.

Olivia wipes the tears from her eyes and approaches Laura from behind.

"This is terrible, to kill a young man like this in cold blood" Laura says to her.

"i know who did this" Olivia says to her.

"who?"

"I met her, it is a black queen named Cecilia" Olivia says

Laura turns towards olivia slowly with shock in her eyes,

"what did you just say?"

"Cecilia"

"No.......impossible!"

"Is there something wrong laura?"

"Olivia, Cecilia is the woman i......left behind when i escaped the great lair over two hundred years ago"

"could it be the same person?"

"When i escaped the great lair, the only reason i was allowed to leave was because i had been impregnated with a blue tentacle spawn, the other woman who i met along the way had just been brought to the lair, i helped her escape from an attack"

"so how did you leave her behind?"

"Before i was allowed to leave, i was told by the overlord that i had to decide between her fate and mine, i could sacrifice her and leave, or stay and be their slave for all eternity."

"So you left the woman behind, and allowed yourself to escape."

"im not proud of it, i felt sorry for doing that to Cecilia, ive had the burden of many years of guilt."

"So now she is a black queen and likely the most powerful being in our lands"

"im not so sure of that Laura"

"Who could be more powerful than Cecilia?"

"i havent had to think about these things for several years you understand, but when i was trying to escape the lair, i met several other princesses just like me, one of whom, Rachel, defeated me in combat and eventually killed my master."

"So you think this Rachel woman is still alive?"

"let me put it this way Olivia, every race of tentacle that i had encountered in that lair, we've seen outside now, and the original great lair is still hidden somewhere in the forest, likely still being utilized and housing several thousand women from all ages past"

"What do you suggest?"

"I think we should find the green tentacles and Rachel, we should make ourselves their allies and then go on the offensive against black and purple"

"Laura, Lazuli is dead, the only women we have left are yourself, me and the young lady we just found on the beach"

Laura walks around the room, looking at the walls, looking at lazuli in the middle of the room, she looks at him and speaks to Olivia from behind.

"Olivia, i have a very important question for you"

"Yeah?"

"Just how dedicated are you to this quest for revenge?"

"I would do anything to crush our enemies and get justice for lazuli"

Laura turns back to her.

"Anything?"

"What are you thinking of Laura?"

"There is a ritual i know of which melds flesh and tentacle together, making them one, blue is finished in these lands, all our overlords are dead and our spawnlings killed, only one being remains and it is right over there, if it dies, blue tentacles are extinct."

"What do you propose?"

"Olivia, your heart is strong and your mind is powerful, you can give up your humanity entirely and become a tentacle overlord"

"Laura, how do you know of this magic?"

"I've been the most trusted queen for the blue tentacle species for centuries, they wanted me to be their leader eventually, and then their overlord, i never wanted to give up my humanity, but you are different, you have fire, passion and determination to see this thing through"

"What will happen to me?"

"You will lose your body and your humanity, but you will take on the body of a blue tentacle, you will gain power from women who you fuck and will feel their pleasure and your own, you will grow stronger with each woman you take, the limits of your power will be endless, but you will thirst on their flesh endlessly, you're desire will never be quenched."

End of Chapter Two Decision.


What do you do?

A. It is her Destiny, Olivia will become a Blue Tentacle Overlord.

B. Olivia will not become a Blue Tentacle Overlord, we must find another way.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

This is a hard choice. but we have to get breeding fast. we now know black can not be trusted. pink is already showed they are good. but we also need to learn about green. and if possible we need an ally that can at least base us some place safe so that way we can start growing. but that mean's we will owe someone big time for this.
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

Olivia is basically you now, lazuli is dead, all of the women are gone, the odds are stacked against you, do you keep your humanity and try to defeat the purple and black tentacles with the help of possibly green and pink or do you become an overlord yourself, gaining the ability to fuck women yourself and gain power in exchange for your humanity, but dooming yourself to an existence where your desire for flesh can never be sated.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

I will go for A. Olivia must be ready to pay for her mistake and she should want to take revenge, even if that mean lost her humanity. At the other side, they still have pink at their side and they will be pleased to make then join, the blue spawn could grow there until turn into a powerfull tentacle creature (dunno if he can turn into an overlord) with the many girls on that place and if the pink overlord will allow it. About green, i dunno if they will help some female humans instead turn them into breeders
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

if Olivia changes, she'll be merging with the blue spawn, so either way, there will only be one blue tentacle creature left for a bit. There's no guarantee that pink will uphold their side of the bargain anymore, since we may not have the means to fulfill our half of the bargain, so they no longer have anything to gain from helping us. Hell, if pink were smart, that tentacle with us would take us for itself right now.

My vote goes with Taken here. The odds have been against us since we left the original lair, and have just been getting steadily worse with every round. we lost women in our own lair, so we put up defenses. we made an alliance with the strongest colour we had a choice to, if we had gone for orange, i doubt we'd even have this much left, distance was probably the only thing that saved this little group. I don't see a single choice we could have made that would have prevented this from happening, we were as prepared as we feasably could have been. Table Flip indeed.

I really hope you have some good reason for this, and I'm going to be flipping more than a table if you start talking about us getting too comfortable like last time, because we obviously weren't. Lair with thirty women in one room. Lairs strong enough to simply walk into a town and openly clear it out. Lairs strong enough to do the same thing to flourishing and prepared other lairs. We had what, 6 women, including the princess? I can't see why we can't have a CYOA about tentacle sex that actually leaves the readers feeling good after reading it, i know this sounds rather rude, but I don't know what else to say here.

About the only way I can see this even starting to work out is if Leon overhears the prospect of a human actually transforming into a tentacle creature, and thinks the opportunity is too good to pass up. That academy setup with their hundreds of women would be the perfect way to ensure such a creature could flourish and be kept under observation, and we'd still be holding cards they have no idea about, so the chance to break free once we were ready is still an open idea. I label this vote X, who's with me?
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

I Vote X as well!
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

We've built up these characters for the longest time, gotten to know them, perhaps even put ourselves in their shoes, a story is much more powerful when there is struggle, contention and loss, nothing comes easy nor should it, im sure you've read novels before where one moment sticks out, a tragedy happens which you didnt expect, because of this kind of storytelling, the other characters are overpowered with emotion, and a desire to change things for the better.

Anyone can write a story on just 'tentacle sex', but putting the dynamics together to create new ways to explore the genre isnt easily done without creating a decent story as well, Before i created this CYOA, i had to try to decide whether or not to make it a CYOA or just write up a story myself, after the material we (as in all of us) have created together, im happy to say that im glad i chose to do a CYOA.

Olivia's Overlord just died, and perhaps lazuli was more than just an overlord to her, it was a creature which made her free alive, freed her from the bonds of humanity, made her something more than a servant girl. Olivia was in love with Lazuli, strange as it may seem, she would have done anything for him, to come back and find out that Black has just murdered it (i dont say him before there is no definitive sex for tentacle beasts), is powerful stuff, and it may be enough for Olivia to sacrifice herself in order to acquire the power required to defeat black, purple and perhaps more.

I understand why people get frustrated with the constant misfortune our characters endure, but it helps put into perspective what little power you have in a world with many terrors, it wouldn't be as enjoyable when things go your way if everything always went your way.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

I don't want everything to go our way, i just want something to go our way. last thing we got good that seemed to have no strings attached was what, finding a conveinient cave at the beach? Everything else we benefitted from has gone sour no more than one round later. Hell, our abductor didn't even get to bring back a woman before it was gone.

The whole thing has been setback after despair after setback, we take options to try and negate that, and nothing works. You talk about one moment, a tragedy, and this is definitely the worst so far, but it's not like everything has been peaches and cream the whole time, not by a long shot.
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

There is no option X, not now anyway.

let me put it this way, when we first met Leon, everyone was skeptical about him, almost nobody wanted him in the group because they were afraid he would use it to his advantage, he would take data down and report back to his superiors back at the Academy, Several posts later, when the option is to leave him on the beach, many people decided to keep him around because he hasn't proven to be treasonous and generally is a good person.

The option to go the compound and become spoon fed by the human race to become all powerful may or may not become available in this CYOA, but before we get to that, we need to decide whether or not Olivia is going to be the matriarch for the entire future tentacle race.

And it is not a choice you should make lightly because every decision we have made thus far has had consequences both good and bad, this decision is no different.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

i have to agree with everyone. we started off a weak tentacle and ended up getting Olivia which was not a bad thing. we lost one girl to a green ambush party before we even became an overlord. when we did become one. the location of choice was the beach. and then we ended up giving a girl so we had an advantage with the robot that could control emotion's.

those two even's and then we hit a wall of set back after set back. and the original character we had been working to make stronger and better is dead. so i have to ask. when did we have a chance to grow?
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Overlord.

Well, let's take a look at our current resources in a fight against black, purple, pink, or really anything:

2 women = useless against tentacles
1 senseless woman = food, so far
one blue spawn = passable in 1v1, which isn't going to happen
xozz = doesn't fight, can't carry a single woman without draining a quarter of his maximum power, or thereabouts, which has been about as much as he's gotten from the women we've given him.

If we go for A, we lose a woman to boost that tentacle to 3v1 or 4v1, at best. still pretty hopeless.

Pink already knows that the Blue side doesn't really exist anymore, since they're all in constant communication. even if the one with us still pretends to be friendly, they're almost certainly sending three or four more to finish us off. It's been pointedly demonstrated that nowhere is safe, so we may as well try for the academy at least. Orange is doubly gone now, and fairly useless to begin with. What else do we have but Leon?

Good consequences? the abductor wasn't one, the sentries were incredibly unhelpful, the pod didn't protect that women, our breeding pool didn't get us anything helpful, xozz has given us a net improvement of 1 male human, and some backstory. can't really think of anything else, am I missing something?

Off to work for 3 hours, i'll check back in after.
 
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