Lurker Wars 2 Discussion Thread
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Lol, I can't really put Loli in because she hasn't said anything about wanting to be in it. If anything I think she said no...
But lets not dwell on that. Glad you both enjoyed, and hopefully the next part will come by a little sooner than they have been.
Lol, I can't really put Loli in because she hasn't said anything about wanting to be in it. If anything I think she said no...
But lets not dwell on that. Glad you both enjoyed, and hopefully the next part will come by a little sooner than they have been.
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Looking forward to it, and I'm always around if you need a second opinion on stuff. Come to think of it, hop on AIM now if you've got the time, completely unrelated but I'm bored and wanna chat
Looking forward to it, and I'm always around if you need a second opinion on stuff. Come to think of it, hop on AIM now if you've got the time, completely unrelated but I'm bored and wanna chat
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Yup. Sinful did yet another spectacular job on the chapter. Nice work!
Now I has a request on anybody who has ever written anything for Lurker Wars. I kinda fucked up with the website in that I made a storyboard that made the bios page fourth on the list. Therefore, I have to make the bio page now. I can bullshit and write up a quick and unbelievably fake bio of the authors, but if any of you could kindly donate a small paragraph about anything about yourself, I'd love you forever because you're guaranteeing me an A.
Yup. Sinful did yet another spectacular job on the chapter. Nice work!
Now I has a request on anybody who has ever written anything for Lurker Wars. I kinda fucked up with the website in that I made a storyboard that made the bios page fourth on the list. Therefore, I have to make the bio page now. I can bullshit and write up a quick and unbelievably fake bio of the authors, but if any of you could kindly donate a small paragraph about anything about yourself, I'd love you forever because you're guaranteeing me an A.
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Holy crap... I rock.
You rock.
This... ROCKS!
Sin, this is awesome beyond my ability to coherently express. ...which is sort of a self-fulfilling untruth, but never mind.
Two notes:
Holy crap... I rock.
You rock.
This... ROCKS!
Sin, this is awesome beyond my ability to coherently express. ...which is sort of a self-fulfilling untruth, but never mind.
Two notes:
Redundancy and a double-use in too short a time period, just knock out 'the soldiers of'. Alternately it could be made “the soldiers of his own hundred-strong Throng”.
The "you" should probably be a "you'll" or "you'd". Unless he's speaking with some form of accent...?
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I actually think that's their title "The Throng of 100 Soldiers." Sounds like one, at any rate. Although, yes, saying "soldiers" twice is a bit redundant. Perhaps "Men of" if it is, in fact, a Squad name.
Kudos, Sin. That is so something that would come out of my mouth.
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Wow, well received much? Anyway...
Throng is indeed a squad label for the Lurkers. Nunu posted all the names in the Lurker Wars social group (which you can get to through my profile) if anyone wants to see them.
@Copper: I do try to capture characters... glad I got some of your vocals anyway.
@Host: shit... typos. I'll go fix that.
@Wonderboy: Publishing, I dunno. We'll see I suppose. Another chapter. It'll come. Hopefully before Christmas.
Wow, well received much? Anyway...
Throng is indeed a squad label for the Lurkers. Nunu posted all the names in the Lurker Wars social group (which you can get to through my profile) if anyone wants to see them.
@Copper: I do try to capture characters... glad I got some of your vocals anyway.
@Host: shit... typos. I'll go fix that.
@Wonderboy: Publishing, I dunno. We'll see I suppose. Another chapter. It'll come. Hopefully before Christmas.
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You better believe it, chica! And yes, you did well on the capturing. I do have a tendency to talk to inanimate objects, especially when they're not doing what I need them to do. And hopefully before Christmas, yes!
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Haha, I feel quite captured as well, though I'd tend to talk to Shale a bit more than that. And I tend away from the automatic weapons, seems like such a waste... Anywho, remind me to chat witcha about it next time you're on, I'll pass some ideas about the person-dog relationship, poor Shale feels under-characterized
Haha, I feel quite captured as well, though I'd tend to talk to Shale a bit more than that. And I tend away from the automatic weapons, seems like such a waste... Anywho, remind me to chat witcha about it next time you're on, I'll pass some ideas about the person-dog relationship, poor Shale feels under-characterized
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Indeed he is. I thought it was okay for an introduction though.
Indeed he is. I thought it was okay for an introduction though.
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Jeesh, I've been so busy lately that I didn't even notice the newest chapter was up. I have mixed feelings on this latest one myself. It could just be because I was introduced though.
I loved the part with Host that was perfect, though who was Chalcon. I don't remember that name, could just be my faulty concussion/alcohol messed up memory.
Copper, Shrike, and Shale was pretty good, though like said I would have done more with the doggy. I immediately pictured the only dog I've ever had a border collie/sheperd mix, I miss Toby.
Mine was fine for an introduction I guess, personally I think my problem with it is my own fault though. I think I kind of brushed you off when you tried to brainstorm with me about my appearance. Probably why it seemed to lack in my mind, either that or it's because I'm so arrogant, a trait which apparently shows up rarely here... I don't know. I'll just have to pay more attention the next time you try to bug me for stuff I guess.
Jeesh, I've been so busy lately that I didn't even notice the newest chapter was up. I have mixed feelings on this latest one myself. It could just be because I was introduced though.
I loved the part with Host that was perfect, though who was Chalcon. I don't remember that name, could just be my faulty concussion/alcohol messed up memory.
Copper, Shrike, and Shale was pretty good, though like said I would have done more with the doggy. I immediately pictured the only dog I've ever had a border collie/sheperd mix, I miss Toby
.Mine was fine for an introduction I guess, personally I think my problem with it is my own fault though. I think I kind of brushed you off when you tried to brainstorm with me about my appearance. Probably why it seemed to lack in my mind, either that or it's because I'm so arrogant, a trait which apparently shows up rarely here... I don't know. I'll just have to pay more attention the next time you try to bug me for stuff I guess.
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Webpage is starting to come along fine now. I have another favor to ask, this time from the editors/authors who wrote seperate stories about Lurker Wars. Can I get a small bio from you guys now? It just has to be a really small paragraph. It's alright if you can't get it in at this point in time because I'll just do what I did with Mo's bio and write stuff up.
Also, just throwing this out again. Can I get some drawings or sketches if any of you wanna bother? I'm finally at the page where I have to get off my lazy ass and start making art for Lurker Wars, so expect my own stuff popping up soon.
EDIT: OH GOD DAMN IT. THIS WAS MY 1000TH POST AND I WASTED IT ON SCHOOL WORK!? FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
Webpage is starting to come along fine now. I have another favor to ask, this time from the editors/authors who wrote seperate stories about Lurker Wars. Can I get a small bio from you guys now? It just has to be a really small paragraph. It's alright if you can't get it in at this point in time because I'll just do what I did with Mo's bio and write stuff up.
Also, just throwing this out again. Can I get some drawings or sketches if any of you wanna bother? I'm finally at the page where I have to get off my lazy ass and start making art for Lurker Wars, so expect my own stuff popping up soon.
EDIT: OH GOD DAMN IT. THIS WAS MY 1000TH POST AND I WASTED IT ON SCHOOL WORK!? FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
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I'm allowed a double post since it's been a week.
Alright, I just realized I have ten pictures due on Friday, which means I actually have to crank out ten drawings for Lurker Wars. Which means you can actually expect to see a couple REALLY rough sketches of some of the things I envisioned in Lurker Wars. Fun! (At least for you guys, I'm gonna have to get crackin')
I'm allowed a double post since it's been a week.
Alright, I just realized I have ten pictures due on Friday, which means I actually have to crank out ten drawings for Lurker Wars. Which means you can actually expect to see a couple REALLY rough sketches of some of the things I envisioned in Lurker Wars. Fun! (At least for you guys, I'm gonna have to get crackin')
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Hah... Hah hah... I'm on picture four, and all I've drawn are various Lurker sketches. I have absolutely no ideas for the ex-Lurkers and the Regulars.
Hah... Hah hah... I'm on picture four, and all I've drawn are various Lurker sketches. I have absolutely no ideas for the ex-Lurkers and the Regulars.
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WELL! I ended up drawing ten pictures, but most of them were just spur of the moment, get the work done quickly pictures. Only about two of them are actually relatively good, and I still need to clean them up. They're both pictures of what I envisioned what Lurkers looked like.When I finish cleaning up, I'll upload them.
WELL! I ended up drawing ten pictures, but most of them were just spur of the moment, get the work done quickly pictures. Only about two of them are actually relatively good, and I still need to clean them up. They're both pictures of what I envisioned what Lurkers looked like.When I finish cleaning up, I'll upload them.