Possible Remake of Jungle Girl

[handofdoz]

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Heh! Glad you guys approve.

Here's a preview of my next project:

I've only got the first six frames done, so of course it's rough. And now I'm going to bed as it's 3:20 am. There will probably be an updated version of this tomorrow.

EDIT: After a small experiment dead-ended, I've now added three more frames and updated the file.

personally i think it would look more realistic if the leg either stayed up or down, though id prefer up.

also a option to take out pubes would be nice, unless its to much trouble than stick with what you got.

another also, will the cum stick this time? if so will it build up over time?

 

[Kusanagi]

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Like Nunu said, it's like the vaginal opening is pasted on top of the rest of the body during penetration. Even just making it so the right leg is over top of it would look better.

The leg moving is all up to personal preference.

The pubes look like they go a little far; then again, this is JUNGLE Girl, so maybe she doesn't trim like most girls -say- that they do.
The pubes might also be going over the right leg a bit, but I really can't tell. It may just be a trick of the light because of the opening.

 

[Incubus]

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Like Nunu said, it's like the vaginal opening is pasted on top of the rest of the body during penetration.

and like the artist said, no it isn't.

 

[Kusanagi]

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and like the artist said, no it isn't.

From what I can tell, no she didn't say that. Sifer2 and Pale thought it was an X-Ray, and she said that that isn't an X-Ray, it's the pubes.

What I'm talking about is how it looks like the 'lips' overlap her right leg, so it looks weird.

If I had been talking about the whole Vagina, I wouldn't have said 'vaginal opening', I would have just said 'Vagina'.

 

[fendo11]

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-takes off cloak of lurking- Well I agree with Kusanagi because I do see the hair, as well as the vaginal opening to be somewhat overlapping her right leg at the point where her leg lifts up.

I am loving how this is turning out though, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK HETTIE!!!

 

[Pheonix Alugere]

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I think the main reason it looks like an x-ray is the way the darker part of the pubes seems to expand when the girl is fucked. I would vote to make the pubes a uniform color or to have them stay in the same ratio and not have one color randomly swell.

 

[Twisted]

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They don't randomly swell. They're like that because the area is being stretched by the penetration(Though with a tentacle of that size, I doubt stretching would occur)

 

[ScrewDriver]

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Protip: you can enlarge the image by pressing ctrl+ +

*stuffs his own set of tentacles into an unwilling victim* sooooo guuuuud!

 

[MadHettie]

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The leg twitch looks a little more natural if I tweak the frame speed so that the frame where she's got both feet on the ground lasts .15 second and the crest of the jump is only .1 second. If too many people find it too distracting, I'll just have her stand still like the older animations.

I've fixed the pubic hair situation by just making it a smaller patch. I also figured that part of what made the insertions look a little weird was the angle of the two slanted lines that defined the pubic region. I sloped them out more and took out the parts that were pasted in front of the tentacle; it looks much better now.

Here's a preview with the first six frames:

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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Yo, she must have something in her eye, cuz she's blinkin' like crazy, dawg!

 

[TentanariX]

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You're paying attention to her eyes, RJ?

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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Such a silly question to ask. I was the one who pointed out the flower to begin with.

 

[MadHettie]

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Yo, she must have something in her eye, cuz she's blinkin' like crazy, dawg!

It's just because I was recycling frames. The image has been updated to include a few more frames. ...dawg.

 

[TentanariX]

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I don't suppose you would happen to have an ETA for when the whole finished product might be out for us to enjoy would you? Though with me losing my internet here at the end of the month I probably wont get to see it

 

[MadHettie]

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Sorry, but no. It largely depends on how difficult my audience is to please. In all seriousness, I appreciate the criticisms and I like the results they inspire. Hopefully once the major kinks (pardon the pun) have been worked out, the animating will go much quicker.

The good news is, I've got some time off from work this week, though a large chunk of it will be spent performing non-pornographic activities. Tomorrow I'm going to the renaissance fair, yay!

 

[Kusanagi]

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Here's a preview with the first six frames:

It looks a lot better now that the right leg is moved in front. I think the cum is messing with it a little, though. It looks like it's on top of the animation, like the opening was, and it makes her right leg look weird. Maybe it's just me though. Anyone else see what I'm talking about?

I like what you did with the pubes. Less confusing now, and you can tell the tentacle is penetrating her pretty hard.

For some reason, the left side of her crotch area looks weird to me (the character's left, the picture's right). I don't know why, either. Maybe I'm just nitpicking, I don't know. It looks good, but there's something nagging at my brain... GAH FUCK IT. DISREGARD THAT. I SUCK COCKS.

 

[Twisted]

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I tried my hand at the music thing again. If only I could get ahold of LM to snag that one I sent in for MG xD

 

[Sifer2]

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So in the pic before last it was'nt supposed to be an X-Ray view? That's funny since if you look at it close it really did look like you could see the tentacle going inside her. Guess it was the darker pubes moving like was said. But now that were on the subject since your good enough to pull off X-Ray accidentally how about we include it for real? lol

 

[Wonderboy]

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Hey! Twisted liked the drums, awesome mood coming from those. Perfect for the jungle. I do think, however, that we may need something longer, I just imagine hearing that on an endless loop for about two minutes... Kind of annoying after a while. (I tried to have it playing in the background whilst doing other stuff on the comp.)

But it really is PERFECT exept for the fact that it needs more length and variation. At the moment it's like a lubed and completely smooth five six inch tentacle. Able to do lots of stuff, but it can't do much on its own, and after a while it gets booring.

 

[Twisted]

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Heh, thanks. I kinda whipped it up in a few minutes; and i found it good for BG noise, but then again I'm known to listen to a song for three days straight.
Since its liked, i will def work on it!

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V2!