Nytemare
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Re: Twin Star - (T)wincest dating-sim RPG *02/07/17*
Look. I was giving objective feedback from playing your game. I played for about 30 minutes on both the brothers and sister's storylines and noticed multiple fatal errors that crash the game. This is tech version 6? So you had 5 versions before this? Having this many unexplained fatal crashes for so little available content is a total joke as a programmer.
Here's what I noticed, you have several locations that aren't even able to be accessed. You can only enter "Home" and "The Rear End" and then all the others have "WIP" when you try to enter them. So 2 locations out of 14, that's like 1/7th of the total locations finished which is 14.2%? Okay, so that clearly shows as of your 6th tech demo, you have next to nothing implemented in the game. Generally speaking, you have ONE tech demo to show your idea and present it to the world and show people you have the skill and talent that is worth supporting. After your first tech demo, you start doing version updates 0.1 or 0.11 (whatever style you like to use) When you are at a version 1.0 that denotes your game is a complete version and anything afterwards is extras and addons so versions 1.01 or version 1.1 would have more content that version 1.0. You've done 6 tech demos and you have these fatal crashes and let me repeat, no content.
In the Rear End with the sister, you can have her change clothes and do a waitress minigame that is bugged and broken. I played it several times and even though I had drinks that were clearly marked for customer 11, though I was standing on top of customer 11 and clicking him hundreds of times, it would not register even though other customers drinks would work. After I was unable to serve customer 11, NONE of the other customers registered their drinks. Then I clicked to go "Home" because there's NOTHING ELSE TO DO BECAUSE YOUR GAME HAS LESS THAN 14% CONTENT and as soon as I clicked to "Home" the game fatal crashed. So please don't blame that on me the user. I clicked the ONLY PLACE AVAILABLE TO ME and YOUR GAME because of your lack of programming skill crashed.
Oh and I forgot to mention the first thing you get to do in game is click on the door to your parents room and you get a message that reads "Our parents are not ready yet! Please support the game on paetron to speed up the development". That's a shameless plug for a game that isn't worth supporting at this point. So kudos to you for having the balls to beg for money there.
So after having the sister skip the minigame and gaining $25 on the first day, any time I try to talk to Mercedes again, she blocks the path and doesn't talk to me. It looks like sometimes I can talk to the stripper, Candice, and get some friendship points... but not much else other than skip time on the bed or the couch in the house. So please when I say your game has nothing to offer. maybe you should try listening. Because I certainly have demonstrated why I clearly have a decent image of what a game should be before asking for money. And if I say your game is unplayable, maybe instead of getting offended and combative, instead you should look at your game and try to figure out what is causing the problems.
At this point between the bring repeating skip time events, nothing happens at all.
Look. I was giving objective feedback from playing your game. I played for about 30 minutes on both the brothers and sister's storylines and noticed multiple fatal errors that crash the game. This is tech version 6? So you had 5 versions before this? Having this many unexplained fatal crashes for so little available content is a total joke as a programmer.
Here's what I noticed, you have several locations that aren't even able to be accessed. You can only enter "Home" and "The Rear End" and then all the others have "WIP" when you try to enter them. So 2 locations out of 14, that's like 1/7th of the total locations finished which is 14.2%? Okay, so that clearly shows as of your 6th tech demo, you have next to nothing implemented in the game. Generally speaking, you have ONE tech demo to show your idea and present it to the world and show people you have the skill and talent that is worth supporting. After your first tech demo, you start doing version updates 0.1 or 0.11 (whatever style you like to use) When you are at a version 1.0 that denotes your game is a complete version and anything afterwards is extras and addons so versions 1.01 or version 1.1 would have more content that version 1.0. You've done 6 tech demos and you have these fatal crashes and let me repeat, no content.
In the Rear End with the sister, you can have her change clothes and do a waitress minigame that is bugged and broken. I played it several times and even though I had drinks that were clearly marked for customer 11, though I was standing on top of customer 11 and clicking him hundreds of times, it would not register even though other customers drinks would work. After I was unable to serve customer 11, NONE of the other customers registered their drinks. Then I clicked to go "Home" because there's NOTHING ELSE TO DO BECAUSE YOUR GAME HAS LESS THAN 14% CONTENT and as soon as I clicked to "Home" the game fatal crashed. So please don't blame that on me the user. I clicked the ONLY PLACE AVAILABLE TO ME and YOUR GAME because of your lack of programming skill crashed.
Oh and I forgot to mention the first thing you get to do in game is click on the door to your parents room and you get a message that reads "Our parents are not ready yet! Please support the game on paetron to speed up the development". That's a shameless plug for a game that isn't worth supporting at this point. So kudos to you for having the balls to beg for money there.
So after having the sister skip the minigame and gaining $25 on the first day, any time I try to talk to Mercedes again, she blocks the path and doesn't talk to me. It looks like sometimes I can talk to the stripper, Candice, and get some friendship points... but not much else other than skip time on the bed or the couch in the house. So please when I say your game has nothing to offer. maybe you should try listening. Because I certainly have demonstrated why I clearly have a decent image of what a game should be before asking for money. And if I say your game is unplayable, maybe instead of getting offended and combative, instead you should look at your game and try to figure out what is causing the problems.
At this point between the bring repeating skip time events, nothing happens at all.
