Re: Zoe's Temptations 0.9 (Sneak Preview!)
I played your game about a week or so ago, version 0.4a, and I enjoyed it. However, when I decided to replay it using different options and choices, I quickly got bogged down in all of the cut scenes at the beginning, and eventually quit in frustration. That's something you may want to take a look at. Given the nature of the game, replayability is a big selling point.
A couple of other things I wanted to mention.
* Personally, I really liked the art, and I think Zoe is especially visually appealing.
* Zoe goes from being an 18 year old virgin who's never even masturbated one day to experimenting with bisexuality the next, and is willing to lose her virginity in a threesome? I realize there's not much in terms of reality here, but that's really stretching credibility if you ask me. I don't think you need to change the art or anything, but perhaps change the text so her masturbation scene isn't the first time she's done it.
