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I got a tumbs up from Tass, he said he'd work on it.

I used to update alot faster, sometime 3 per person per day, but since college started back up I don't have time to go get out all the files needed, roll the dice, etc for all active characters. If I update in a given day, I do everyone that posted, then if I'm in a good mood I'll give quick repliers extra updates.

Everyone gets a chance at somepoint to move up a training level. Yeah, the guns are a bit wonky right now, especially the shotguns, which I might revise a bit soon, but the rifles and pistols are working good. Several people have used them to great effect, though if you ready Kathy's thread, that seriously was just really crappy rolls, coupled with the strongest base monster, which I now do not unleash on newbie players (as often )

Some, but not as much.

My albums are mostly for my own use. The same thing applies to the Monster Girl Profiles. I needed a reliable place to host the images for the monster girls for use in the Monster Girl Tournament.

It wasn't made to act as an extensive list of each profile.

A few mistakes here and there, like the last paragraph having blue words that were details and not him actually talking kind of takes away the 'pull,' so watch out for those mistakes.

As for what I think... Well... I could speak my exact thoughts, but from previous experience, that'd be bad. So let me try to word it differently than I want to.

The intro to the story, arriving by sea, is a great way to get past the dreadful writer's block of having to think of a starting story, since it's obviously the easiest way out, but I feel that such an intro is mostly just to get the ball rolling. Not really meant to amaze or interest the reader.

The descriptive writing of what his condition was, I felt was sort of neat. But I felt like the impact it made on him was missing. It's obviously uncomfortable, but I don't know if he's really bothered by it, unless you tell me. So I felt it was kind of hard to connect with him.

The sighting of the pyramid, a nice touch to indicating what you want, and how you want to proceed. Even further would be adding small hints of what you'd like to have happen inside the pyramid. A shudder, a brief imaginative thought, or something similar to indicate, and help build up the 100% likely event of a monster girl attack. An example would be, "Duex walks into the cave, his skin shivering as he thinks of what awaited him inside. 'Caves mean bats...' he thought to himself, briefly wondering if such a thing as bat monster girls existed, shuddering at the thought of being swarmed by dozens of them at a time..."

That helps guide me into what happens next, which would most likely be werebats appearing, and attacking him. A neat trick if your GM is one who's looking to please not only him/herself, but you as well.

'Yiff' is the sound that Fox's make when theyre getting it on, and its usualy used to take the piss out of 'Furrys' which are the animal people thing. But most Furrys (like me) take it in stride, so dont worry searching on google wont show you bestiality just Furry porn more than likley (and yes Krystal is hot )

You mean the man in the boat??

Im just jking. Apparently his comp has been acting up so he dosent respond to me pms until an hr later even though it says hes on...