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29th January 2009, 03:07
Borrowing an idea from others and starting on of these myself.
Two things I want to start with:
First, Shadows isn't finished yet. I know that. However, I'm at a writer's block on that one, so it'll be a while before that gets an update.
Second, I'll be updating my new one, The Storm War, periodically. And if you like the setting of it, I'm running an RP using it. For those already in it, here's some of the backstory.
29th January 2009, 05:48
I've only read the prologue so far, and it seems intriguing. But there was some confusion on what was happening with the castle. It seems like a reference to the past but there is no solid proof of this fact.
29th January 2009, 14:14
In the Prologue for Storm War, the italicized sections are in fact meant to be flash-backs.
30th January 2009, 02:09
I realized that, but on my screen the italics weren't very noticeable.
30th January 2009, 04:14
Are you worried at all about granner and word usage? I've spotted two that have made me twitch, but I can't think of a way to make the first one sound better. It doesn't really matter, but if you decide you want a proofreader, I'm all for it.
Also, feel free to use my character if you so desire, I've got more details for my backstory in my head, just need to get some quality time with my keyboard. A second person to bounce ideas off and offer suggestions would be great.
30th January 2009, 04:26
I am aware that there are a few grammar mistakes. Believe me, Word's bitching about them. However, it's usually in places where I am deliberately mimicking how certain characters might be inclined to say what's going on, if they were narrating.
30th January 2009, 04:41
Alright, just checking. And I completely agree with you, Word's grammer half is absolutely useless, especially in speech. Anyway, great story, keep at it.
22nd May 2009, 13:02
Well, still trying to get the last two chapters of Storm War done. Writer's block sucks massive balls.
Unrelated to that, I'm trying to work on another story, which depending on how well it turns out...You guys might get to read it.
22nd May 2009, 13:10
is it sad that i just checked that yesterday? i keep hoping that you've edited them in and forgot to say something...
22nd May 2009, 13:11
Actually, I like to hear that at least one person still checks.
Really am trying to get those done, it's just...Writer's Block.
22nd May 2009, 13:14
i know the feeling, i have massively good ideas (in my opinion) for stories, but they always seem to just peter out halfway...
22nd May 2009, 19:03
Writer's block is horrible. It's just a plague of the mind.
25th May 2009, 02:41
The other story that I'd mentioned working on is up. Shrike and XSI have both helped me with certain elements of it, so some credit goes to them for the assistance.
8th June 2009, 13:27
Third part of my latest is up.
25th August 2009, 04:14
Since I managed to lose all of my previous work, save that which I've posted previously...
I started on an entirely new story. It's intended to be a spoof of the Gundam stuff, with some inspiration for the idea coming from watching a couple of Mel Brooks movies.
Here's something about this story: If someone wants me to include a personal character, or create one for them, just let me know. If I can work the character in, I will. Also, you will get some say in how the character gets developed. Just remember, this will be a story, not an RP.
15th September 2009, 16:00
For those who've been reading my spoof story, the montage is up.
EDIT: In the Major Characters thread, I've modified it to include the weapons load-out for the suits used by the Black Talons, including pictures to specs pages for what I used as starting points on the designs.
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